Hehe, I liked that you put that 'he walks the paths of the deaad, but is not dead yet'. Really cool. All these people, with their problems. You do a great job of putting them into short text!

Sir Fuzzalot

P.S. Oh oh do one about Arwen!

yay! An update! Sorry, I've been on vacation for sometime. I loved it! It seems kinda like a riddle, except it's not, because you've already told of whom the chapter's about. Seems logical to tell about the shield for Boromir. I mean, He always has it with him.

I loved the simile for this one!

Sir Fuzzalot

Yes you updated! Hallelujah!

AND YES SCHWET you did one for Faramir! *does happy dance* doo doo da de ba ba da da... Awesome. These two are so sad, I wonder what you're going to do next!

Keep me posted!

Sir Fuzzalot

Nice little piece! You might want to consider changing the word "bobblehead" though. That really isn't a very Middle Earth thing and it rather jars in the middle of the piece. It doesn't mean quite the same as what we associate "bobblehead" to mean, but you might simply say: "To be not a person but a bowed head, nodding when needed."

- Deandra

swet, you like LotR too? I'm a major fan; I plan on making 13 fanfics of it myself.

I love how you began and ending with the same thing, kinda like a cinquain poem. It is utterly wonderful, and I cannot wait until you update (if you do). I'm a fan of Éowyn, so I can't wait to see what the plot of this one is.

...will it involve Faramir? :)

Sir Fuzzalot