Amazing story! *is jealous of your writing skills*
Poor Vergil D:
Great writing (:

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^_^that was beautiful. I loves it! more of this please

Hey you should continue this. It's really great and I think both Vergil and Lady have chemistry together.

that is so wonderful. you captured Virgils gruffness, his dark temper, and yuor Lady is so cute and sweet and yet still brave and daring just like she is. Great job

8D woohoo! xmas morning with VxL

Hey! it's good,well next chapter please ^ ^

I love it. Please more of this i hope ^^ a continuation? its beautiful

That was so cute! :3 *feels all warm and snuggly* Lovely imagery and great characterisation. Lady's so cute when she's all shy; I like the umbrella too, made me coo with delight when it sheltered them both.

I swear Ole' Vergie is a dark chocolate caramel - cold, dark and bitter on the outside, warm, smushy and sweet on the inside. I bet he has a teddy bear XD

^_^ *huggles*

This is a beautiful story and beautifully written. Great job.

Aw, hehe, how cool, it was so emotional and dark and, agnsty at places, and the rain, I love rain ^^! But in the end it came round, so suddenly, so sharp, but it didn't feel out of place, or wrong or like some cop-out from a more realistic ending, it just felt... Right :). I enjoyed this, nice dialog and scenery, especially the whether, and just, overall, really cool, well done :D!

Wow, that was really, really good. Although I haven't played Devil May Cry, it's has peaked my interset several times. I love the way you captured their emotions, or some of their emotions anyways. I loved it. Keep it up.