*claps* That was...that was...BEAUTIFUL! T.T

Very good! -

Much improved (and yes, I did read... again)!

This is a good heartfelt view from Edward, however, I still think Alphonse is your canvas. I look forward to your future works of FMA.

BTW - this has not ruined it for me.

So sweet and yet so sad! The only thing I can say is that Ed gave up his arm for Al. He'd already lost his leg while trying to bring back his mother. But other than that it was wonderful! Adding to favs. Oh yeah and I GOTTA see the ending! I keep reading stuff and seeing pics but I haven't seen it on TV! Oh well, good story anyway!

This is pretty cool. I dunno if you're planning to write a seqel or not, but if you aren't could I! This story just sparked insperation bigtime. E-mail me your answer at