Good idea and thought out well but the poor english and jumping around makes this story to hard to read. I lost intrest half way through the first chapter. Try getting a few pre-readers and an editor.

what a wondetful story i must say...must say?...what kind of expresion was that suppoce to be? hug... what?...suppocce...suppoce? who wrote suppoce...
Well who cares...we don't so that means...no one those...right...ok what I'm tryingo to tell you here is that this story is great...there's just a little problem with it... problem...problem??... yeah, problem, YOU SHouLDn'T TAke like 9 and a half years to update. What we all mean is that you should update sooner...SOONER... ok? did you got that??
ok , really like the story, don't eat suggar.. is bad...bad...bad indeed... bad

Please don´t take ages to update again!

m very good, I{m enjoying it
update soon!

wow, you are really good...realy good indeed love Royoga, you are making this my favorite story.. really, i´m loving it
hope you update soon, keep your nice work, it is magnnific haha what a stupid word
well I will tell you an advice...but your stoy is perfect.
keep it like that

interesting please update soon.

Interesting twist to the Neko-ken.

I hope to see the update soon

Ukyo wants to kill Ryoga? Poor guy.

A box...I wonder what's in it...

Well, I guess Ranma and Akane will be getting along fairly well in this story.

interesting please update soon.

All right! Great chapter - wondered what the match ups would really be. Cool connection between the cooks of the story!... Keep going, its a fun read.

Hehe, poor Ryoga. Now he has to fight Ukyo. I bet she's mad because he left her behind. Akane should've mentioned to Ranma that Ukyo was angry.

Well that's better. Ukyo better not raise sumo pigs, that's Akari's job.
Those fake chapters were pretty funny.

I'll be waiting for the next chapters

Nice chapter.

(reads the fake scenes) Uh...right.

I expected more out of Keita.