Sorry for the delay in reviewin . . . the alert email seems to have gotten lost in my inbox! Poor, poor Grissom . .. really an emotional chapter! So, only one left? I'm sad to see this fic ending soon, but it's been really great!
-Hannah

Wow. I can tell you didn't like this chapter very much. You didn't even bother to go over your spelling (it's the first time I've nit-picked about spelling before, but I saw it a lot in this chapter.) Whatever though. I don't see what your problem is. It was fine! Though, it's a little hard to imagine Gil that depressed to contemplate jumping.
Ooh! Look at me...I'm being very critical today. -SO not like me!- but alas. I'm off...to do some authors notes to my story I'm updating tomorrow then off to watch a movie! Keep writing!

keep it up!
-mystical panther

I Bet the look on Gill's face was much more imaginable ever since you watched the pilot. But alas, you always find a way to make him sad. Well you keep writing okay? Cuz I'm going to write my story now. Cuz it's also a sad-ish atmosphere. Kay? Kay! ^^

So, wait a minute. It wasn't Sara from the show? It was another Sara? Is that why Grissom is probably secretly in love with Sara?

I'm confused again.

So sad! I was freaking out...great job! Must have more...

Aw! Fluff! I love fluff!

Oh my gosh, poor Grissom!! I can tell why he's so hesitant towards the nowadays Sara! A really emotional chapter!
-Hannah

You're a total S/G fan. Obsessive much. The only way you could but something like that in this fic. XD
Ah, that's okay tho. For once, he wasn't sad! That's good! So you keep writing, okay?

A little fluff is always good . . . hee hee, Grissom in a tie dye shirt and bell bottoms! I love that image! I'm correct in assuming that this Sara is not Sara Sidle because of the age and eyes, right? I really liked this chappie . . . nice to see Gil having a nice time in between all the angst (though I do love the angst :D).
-Hannah

Boo. Stop making him cry! Now we know why he doesn't cry in the show. It's cuz he used up all that salt water when he was younger! Jeez.
And here we get to see why he wants to become a CSI. Yup yup I still remember what happens! I want chapter 6 so hurry u now :P

Sweet look at how Grissom's life progresses. Only one minor thing: "The girl pulled out her phone, and began to dial." There weren't cell phones in 1970, when Grissom would've been 14.

Wow, that was really moving . . .good reason for him to become a CSI. Really great chapter, I can't wait for the next one :)
-Hannah

The roller coaster...where sad people run to...:'(...SAD LIL GIWY THAT'S NOT SO LIL ANYMORE!! :'(...that's gurl was meean! she was a meannie beeanie!! and u know what?! She's NOT nice enough to be a witch!!...She may have shiny hair and a pretty name but her heart's...her heart's...as black...as COAL!...:'(...she made giwy cry! CRY! Has she no shame?!?!?...but at least Gilly choose an interesting place to cry:)...and one day he'll meet the gurl of his dreams and be happy forever! (i know ur hoping that, that gurl is Sara:P) well anyway...i haveta go to school now b4 i'm late:P..so i'll review ur other story when i get back! TTya on MSN! BAIBAI!^__^

Poor Gil! Great Chapter though