The part at the end had me falling out of my chair... I wonder what Yuugi and Yami's reactions were...

Oh that was adorable!

i liked the end (why don't you ever get that passionet bakura!) it was really funny! i like it very much! ja ne!

SWET. i like this!

LOL! nice

great story

Oh wow, this story was great ^_^ I love when you played as Yami Malik! His thoughts were just so amusing and I love this pairing so much..

As you probably know by know, we have the same humour. Thus, this too is funny.

You portrait Marik as such a child, insane adorable and clueless. We don't even need to know what Malik is thinking, we get all we need from the eyes of Marik.
Then Malik's friends and family comes in and gets to see much more then they would have wanted.. Marik bragging about his present is amusing, since he minutes/seconds earlier threatened to hit his hikari if he told anyone about it. Sounded like someone was in denial there for a while.

lol poor Yugi. Rishid must weight a ton for a little midget like him. Ryou wanting to be pinned down and actually hitting Bakura for it = priceless

The first time I read this and read the "Anger and hatred are my parents?"-line, I actually went "aw". I also did the same the second time, third, fourth etc. It's just so... so... them. Depressed/bitter Malik saying it and confused Marik not understanding.

aw so cute!! X3 I like the p.o.v you started out in... ^-^ that was just adorible...! X3

Aw! ^_^ What a sweet story. It gave me the warm fuzzies!

lol i love the ending!1

That was really really funny! I loved it! Happy Birthday Malik!!

Carmen: ahahhahaha that was really sweet and funny and its going on my favourites list seeya! up[date again soon

hehe i luv it! expesiouly da ending: “Why don’t you ever get as passionate as Malik’s yami,” Ryou snapped, “I never get pinned down!” that was classic! Great work!!

Eek! That was so cute! ^^ I loved it so much, hooray for Malik getting a ROCKING b-day present! *laughs* A-And poor Baku-chan!

“OUCH! RYOU! WHAT THE HELL?”

“Why don’t you ever get as passionate as Malik’s yami,” Ryou snapped, “I never get pinned down!”

XD Man, that was awesome! So cute!

I'm so glad people are celebrating their birthday, I have one up now too! If you want you can check it out tell me how I did!

Goodbye and Goodluck!