*It's very beryy beautiful and cute !
*C'est vraiment beau et mignon.
Bravo !
BYE. Chiji

Wow. I know I haven't talked to you in ages, but I was surfing the site, and saw that you had written something FMA, so I read it. Yes, I have no life. XP

It was good. I thought a couple of lines were iffy, but it's hard to write a rhyming poem that doesn't have a couple of off-lines.

My favorite by far was the second verse. Not only did it sound great, it made a lot of sense and managed to capture Al's feelings well.

I could talk about every line here, but I won't, as I'm sure you have better things to do with your life than listen to me blab. XD Great job. This is the first poem of yours I've read, and I really enjoyed it. You should write poetry more often.

-Spork

Aw! How sweet! I was listening to "Shunjou (Lust)" from FMA while reading this and it really fit! To the point of happy tears! Well done!

you are very good! nice poem! comtinue striving for the best that you can be~!

very good. i dont normally like poems that are fanfics, but this was good.

Awesome dude!
You really got the thoughts of Alphonse spot on!
It really does describe his feelings and how he felt on the matter perfectly!
A great poem and a great start to the Full Metal Alchemist fics!
Well done Lysha, keep it up! X3

Aww... that was so sweet. I don't really know much about FMA besides what you have told me but that was really sweet. That was great to say it was written in the middle of the night!

How cute! *sniffs* Short and bittersweet. I like it.

Great poem! Even though "blood" and "understood" don't rhyme well, but hey, who said poems HAD to rhyme? Keep writing ^_^