-gasp- Please update! This is a good story. TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED TO BASTION!

They're all GIRLZ! Oh spooky!

Cute beginning, my friend last-blue mage recommended it to me.

NICE!

omg i love it cant wait till bliss and syrus are finally together

Wahh! This fic is so good! I especially love the pairing of Jessica and Bastion! ^_^ It is so cute! Oh! I also love your character profiles of Bliss and Jessice on Deviantart! I'm fantasy-princess on DA by the way! :P

Love it update again soon. ^.^

you've got me on tender hooks waiting! i hate these lil cliffhangers! -stomps foot- OUCH! *cough* neway, gud chapter, even tho u did kinda leave us hangin. looking forward to the next chapter ;3

By the way, can you tell me the url for the site that was so helpful to you?

I like this quite a bit. It's not the most cohesive story, but it has got a lot of character. I really wasn't expecting the thing with Jaden and the little girl. I am interested to see where this will lead. Keep up the good work. By the way, if you'd like me to beta for spelling/grammar, I'd be happy to. Grammar is basically my religion. I make sacrifices to the holy spirit of the semi-colon. ;-D

that was disappointing

this is an awesome story!! Jessica is hilarious, the way she flirts wit Bastion is very entertaining. i just love BastionxOC fics, probably because Bastion is my fav character on Yu-Gi-Oh!GX. XD cant wait for the next chpt! update ASAP!

short and sweet! and they is gonna get their own back! o yea! for some strange reason i can imagine Jaden in a dress, i dont know why...

OH MY GOD! AFTER ALL THIS TIME YOU UPDATED AND IT'S A SAD SAD CHAPER?!?!?!

You're good! This is the coolest story I've read in a long time!! Keep up the good work!

T^T sad chapter but good non the less :D poor Syrus, he all depressed. i think you should know i liked the duels, even though im not into dueling myself ;3 this is getting really really good! till next chapter, whenever you update lol.