Really interesting. Cant wait for the next chappie.

cool!
I don't think you should worry too much about explaining all of the mythology; i have a friend who regularly tries to explain it to me and i find it's a lot easier to understand when it's only partly explained. Makes it easier to remember everything.

I think it's ADORABLE how Artemis and Holly were pushing eachother off the chairs.
Keep writting!

HAHA!
only Artemis Fowl would go and play a piano after an attempt on his life!
You've written this really, really well!
Artemis is completely in character, unlike other fanfiction i've read.

I love your style - References! *drool* And the Holly/Artemis relationship is perfect. This story is very enjoyable - can't wait to read the rest.

Amazing! This is just too good! Please don't tell me you're planning to abandon this story! That would be so utterly grotesque! I hope you update soon...even if you take your time its ok...just update ok?
Hope to hear from you soon.
-Hikari

Mah... Why haven't you updated ? Your story is great!

ah! uppydatey soony pleasey! sorry, dont know what wa going on back there with the ys on the end of each word *grins sheepishly*

anyway, wow! you sound just like Eoin Colfer! its scary! but very cool. where the hell did you learn all that greek stuff? it added a great effect. well done! pleasey continuey! (see, im back to the ys on the end of each word...)

This story is fantastic!! There is no other word to describe it. I love every aspect of it, really. Great characters, great layout, very intricate story.. please, please, please update this story soon. I really can't wait to hear more. A great fic!!

nice. i love your fic. Natalie sounds like an interesting character. can't wait for the next chappie!

Love this. Absolutely Love IT (tm)

Great new chapter! Heh. "It's Medea, not Natalie." I don't like her very much...poor Artemis. All alone...with crazy Ryan...sucks to be him right now. Yeahh...poor Butler too. Poor Juliet. Poor Holly. Poor everyone!! You are a very evil authoress. You rock! :D

let me say that i am SO EXTREMELY FLATTERED by ur uh reply. even if it wasn't met as that much of a compliment its good to know that someone isnt annoyed with my overly abundant writing..

i liked juliets response to the helplessness.. how u had her sad for her first failure.. and fearing for the death of artemis.. and how angry she was at natalie. how she sort of MADE her the symbol of it all.. all the issues. ya.

and wuts-his-name.. ryan. it was GENIUS the little drumming thing u had. where he was drumming a real piece.. i think that's a good way to show hes not just the flash and bang and crudeness his character first comes across as. but i like the stark contrast u made w/ natalie.. how they're almost complete differences.. natalie was almost spooky with her pre-artemis like self. but im glad u made the child characterization.. shes sorta innocent isnt she?

and then i liked artemis's little d'arvit there at the end.. that was funny.. or i guess amusing. everythings been totally thrown to the wind. but i like how u had his train of thot. 'where am i' basically. i dont know y but thats the first thing ppl think of. and obvoiusly pain and then escape. but the way u made it better was u sorta advanced it a level, slightly more detail proves that he thinks a little bit faster than a normal person.

and for ryan i think u just needa show a bit more of how intelligent he is. he just came across as a dumb ruler. except for the drumming (which was so cool) but it makes sense. im assuming his character is like extremely smart in a memorization kind of way, and that because of his secludedness he got very narrow-minded about certain things. but all-in-all im extremly happy w/ the OC's.. they're not perfect. u obviously dont have some sort of strange attachment that authors will have. just bring out their imperfections like uv brought out artemis's and its all fine and dandy. haha.

i think u shuld read this review in parts...

Wow. Another good chapter. *bounces impatiently, waiting for next bit*

it was exciting. and artemis was getting really irritable throughout it.. but i liked the physical feat stuff u had going on.. it was amusing. and the 'Artemis, somewhat impatient, picked dust particles from the sleeve of his suit.' hah funniness. i just LOVE how u do his genius.. besides that.. the gadgets were almost perfect. and i have a type of perfectionphobia. cuz i know somethings gunna happen. personally i liked how u had artemis handling the natalie thing.. because he could have easily left her and had it b over with.. they would never have been able to track it... but i personally think his conscience got in the way. i liked the bluntness of 'drop them'

and hmm. the gun thing. i hafta say that if u didn't put the last sentence in there it would sound lacking.. but when u keep it in it sounds sort of random. i think it would have been much cooler if u could have found a way to connect it to something that had been said previously. something about teh city mebbe.. im not smart enough to figure out something like that.

still mucholy liked the dialogue though.. i write way to long reviews. can't wait till uupdate! its getting incredibly exciting. i wish i was as punctual as u r w/ updating..

please don't say that this chapter wasn't good.. i had forgotten the real reason that i loved ur writing so much! its like an actual novel.. with the gadgets explained all thoroughly and such.. though of course there wouldn't be the slight bit of hormonal jarring betweenst everyone if it were.. which is y ur so much better! the 'have faith in genius..god' line was AMAZING. controversial to all the jihadists out there mebbe but still AMAZING. it might be called a filler chapter.. but since i like the juliet/arty stuff s'all good. and since the dialogue is sorta setting up for some excitement i liked it a lot. i wasn't all caught up in medea like i was the last couple of chapters.. i could sit back and enjoy the canons!! who0-ho0! im going to read ur next chapter now...