I think i haven't read such a masterpiece in a long time, it's sad that it's on hiatus, but i'm looking forward to read some more if it's possibly?

Awesome stuff man. After reading this, I have to go take a shower.

Good lord. please say that there are more chapters coming!

more please ^^

this is a real good story keep it up.one more thing these are some of the longest chapters i've ever read and i like that.thou i did get a little lost during the flashback near the end of the chapter.

interesting story. but it's not over right? there will be more chapters right? i mean whats going to happen next?

well, i can tell you put a lot of hard work into this one and, if not for just that, you deserve a lot more than just three reviews. how many hits has this gotten? i wager quite a few. if half that many people reviewed, then there would be people to draw on to give this story more of a plot than "get kim and shego to have sex". not that that was a problem, or anything. if that were the case, the whole ninth chapter could have been a one shot. anyways, good job, and i hope you take this further

you havn't gotten very many reviews but i wanted to put my two cents in in order to encourage you to keep writing because you obviously put a lot of work into this and i wouldn't want you to think that it went unappreciated.
overall, a good story; good vocab, a decent premise, nice interaction between characters *yay*
i only have two major problems with this story; my biggest problem is that if ch9 is the end of this story then the only thing you've accomplished in those chapters and close to 90 words is to get kim and shego into bed together. ~nothing~ has been resolved, not the bet between shego and kim, not the possible complications w/ mrs. doctor possible and her bugging issues, the whole situation with ron/bonnie/drakken and dr.Dementor; you've hinted at a potential betrayal by rufus and the advanced naked mole rats, potential betrayal by triple S, the origin of kim's comet powers and the nana connection, and the part the 'furries' have to play in everything. all of these are great ideas and directions to take the story in but come on. i've heard of openended stories but this is a bit much dont you think? (unless the point of this first story is establishing their relationship then i guess you've accomplised that:)
my second problem is a bit hard to define. i guess the best way to describe it is that your writing rambles. you flow from idea to idea with nary a transition in sight. i'd be reading a paragraph about one thing and suddenly there'd be a whole different topic going on. it sometimes felt ~incomplete~, like there were one or two more sentences that would finish the thought but just happened to be missing. sorry that i can't give a better disciption of it.
otherwise, it was good times.

Hmm...Fear the ladies with the angry gleam in their eyes. I enjoyed the last chapter quite a bit...I'd also like to say that this fic was much better than some of the others I've read, not the best of the best, but close.

Please keep the chapters coming.