 NaruhinaDattebayo 2009-06-17 . chapter 2More! |
 Malix2 2008-12-19 . chapter 2I was actually curious to how they'd react to the new naruto, would hinata like the new him or did she like him for how he used to be. However, it seems to have been 3 years since last update so I don't think I'll find out anytime soon if at all. I've lost count how many stories I've gotten interested in that have ended up like this, essentially dead. Although, it doesn't help that I get interested in just about all naruto fanfics, as long as there's no guy on guy or sasukexhinata those are just wrong in my opinion. Why does it seem the majority(or at least a high percentage) of naruto fanfic authors seem to insist on portraying naruto as homosexual? I even started reading this one fanfic that had an interesting idea, where naruto was transported into the digimon world and was turned into a digimon, but I couldn't make it past chapter 2/3 because they made him yaoi, I even tried skipping over the yaoi parts as best I could because I liked the digimon part, but they completely embedded it in the story to where it was most of it, totally ruining it for me. Is there some excuse for it where something in the series makes people believe naruto is gay, or are a lot of naruto fanfic authors gay men? I just don't get it. Anyway, I'm rambling, and I just wanted to get that frustration out of my system, because over half the results I got back when I was searching for a similar story of naruto having a child came back narutoxsasuke and that's not even freaking biologically possible unless you make one of them female. (and I don't buy the excuse that naruto's sexy jutsu makes him actually female, it's just a regular transformation, get over it people, besides I don't believe even naruto could hold that jutsu for nine months.) Anyway, it ** me off that even though I was searching for things like 'baby' and 'daughter' I actually had to filter out things like 'mpreg' 'narusasu' 'sasunaru' and 'yaoi' I wish there was a seperate site for that so I didn't have to filter through search results to avoid all that. *realizes he's ranting and forces himself to stop, nobody will probably even read this considering it's been 3 years since an update.* |
 Kasuchi, Koichi 2008-09-12 . chapter 2 Damn it! Get back to writing this story! I want to see what Hinata thinks of the new Naruto! |
 hinata78 2008-06-21 . chapter 1cool=D |
 LordHatredX 2007-01-05 . chapter 2awee to bad u gave up on story |
 chria lutz 2006-11-24 . chapter 2 this story is very funny come up with another chapter soon. |
 animegirl9000 2006-05-14 . chapter 2oh oh! I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE |
 1chucha2 2006-04-22 . chapter 2If you wont end it, i will find you (insert evil laught) |
 Inume-blue 2006-03-05 . chapter 2ok so ya i reviewed, i realy liked this ch. alot. and i am not easy to please, unless you give me cookies.
XD. um...well... i dont wanna soud mean... please dont take it the wrong way...:baking up:...there are a few and i mean a few as in maby 3?... um mistakes... n-not major... but there were a few times a girl was talking you said he insted of she and vice-versa. and (sorry) at the begining it said "I guess being Hinata is the only good side in this dinner thing..."
was it supost to say " I guess being 'with' Hinata.."?
anyway please dont hate me! :quivers in fear:...:hands you plate of cookies,XD: do you like cookies?
ya so um good bye
_Inume
ps. please do not take offence, as for myself i know i am a horrible speller so you are better than i'll ever be. i just wanted you to know. :hand you glass of milk 4 cookies, runs away: |
 Inume-blue 2006-03-05 . chapter 1i love it, it is so cute. i will probably not review 4 a while. i am bad at that. :) . i love the naruto&hinata parings! well got 2 go. bubye.
_Inume |
 DarkBlackDragone 2006-03-05 . chapter 2AWESOME! I loved it to death! Hurry and make the next chapter!! |
 Nat Hockins 2006-01-29 . chapter 1This is pretty good, it's an interesting concept and you pulled it off pretty well. There's a couple spelling/grammar errors, but nothing that really makes much of a difference. Other than that, the only problem I have with it is the fact that Naruto's whisker marks are exactly that, whisker marks, they are birthmarks, not actual whiskers. But this is fanfiction, small changes are something everyone does, so I suppose the whisker marks being actual whiskers is entirely plausible. Either way, it's well written and I look forward to the next chapter. The world can always use more NaruHina. :) |
 writer00anonymous 2006-01-28 . chapter 2what will happen?? please update :D |
 Seidi 2006-01-27 . chapter 2YAY! NarutHina Pwns. Its cute. But what whiskers? The markings on his cheeks or just facial hair. Just wondering cuz...I thought you meant his fox demon markers and I was like, "WTF?" But other then that I love it. Just the whiskers confused me. Lol Continued its really good. Once again YAY NARUHINA PWNS |
 TheEndlessSnow 2006-01-16 . chapter 2i'm scared to read the next chapter. i'm not sure if i=he can act 'presentable' love the fic |