Hi

I just read your story it was a very very good story.

Beautiful but sad, this one. I love it.

You did a fine work on this.

A good story, in-character depth. The Centre's plots and schemes played out before our eyes. Although not enough of Jarod in it if you ask me ;)

great story, keep it up

*****/5

I really liked this story. It's very intense and you capture the characters well.

Keep it coming! I am really enjoying this story. :-)

Beautiful! All that anger. Can hardly wait for part 3.

Sad, but potent story. Hope it will get a follow-up. Loved it.

how sad...