Reviews for The Crystal Chronicles

Reviews For: The Crystal Chronicles

Phyllis Joy Wolfe 2006-08-24 ch 5,	abuseLooks good. I'm looking forward to reading more ;~)
PotterRocksMySocks 2006-06-21 ch 5,	abusethat was awesome. I really liked how you put it in diary form. It makes even better. I thought maybe you could put just a little more detail into the battle scenes. Just friendly criticism. please update soon!
Fun Person 2006-06-04 ch 5, anon.	abuseHeh, first level eh? Nice chapter. I wonder if your gonna give Jack the Ragnarock, or Ultima Weopon? I advise him to get Ragnarock, but meh, thats my opinion. Anna will probally get the other one(I'm Clavat). Hehehehe, Kai, you are one sick man. Can't wait till you get to Raem and the Meteor Paracite. I just can't beat that level since I play with my 3 other friends, and as you know, multiplayer makes the stage harder. Oh well. Update
Zacharies Ringweaver 2006-05-31 ch 5,	abuseExcellent chapter! You write it like it was really a diary entry, which really adds effect to the story. I'm curious to see what kind of changes you make to the journal in later chapters. Till then.
Cyberweasel89 2006-05-31 ch 5,	abuseYou're welcome! I'm happy to review. And yes, I am lucky to have three siblings. Ya know, some kids who have siblings wish they were an only child, while some only childs wish they had siblings. People should really count their blessings and be happy about what they DO have. ^_^ Great chappie! This is quickly going higher and higher on my mind's fav fic list! ^O^ Maximillian is now Maxwell? Aw... I liked Maximillian. But if you think it's best this way, then it won't matter to me. ^_^ But, actually, Maximillian doens't sound like Lilian. It only looks like it. Maximillian is "mill-yuhn", "mill" as in "pill". Lilian is "li-lee-ehn." But if you think it's best to change the name, I won't try to change your decision. It's your fic, you do whatcha want with it. ^_^ Ya know what I'm gonna do? I'm thinking of writin' a fanfic for FF:CC about a four-person caravan, but I'm gonna change something. I'm gonna have four people AND Mog! Cause Mog is so cute and you can paint him and it's a shame that he isn't in multiplayer! That way the four Caravaners can fight while Mog carries the Chalice. ^_^ I can't wait for the next chappie! But don't feel rushed, hon! Take your time. ^_^
Fun Person 2006-05-27 ch 4, anon.	abuseSorry for the long wait. hehe Lilian likes Sol eh? getting better! update!
Cyberweasel89 2006-05-21 ch 1,	abuseHm... pretty good. You have very good spelling and grammar, as well as great storytelling skills. I can't wait to see all the characters's entries. Hm... That's an idea... If I play Multiplayer with my siblings, We could have one of us take care of healing, one take care of spellcasting, one the physical combat, and one carry the chalice. Of course, I'm sure my siblings'll complain about carrying the chalice, so we'll probably have to switch jobs occasionally. I don't mind carrying the chalice, of course, but I'm the one with the most experience with that game. I'd say my twin bro would best suit a Lilty, my big bro a Yuke, my little sis a Clavat, and me a Selkie. I know my sis wouldn't wanna be a Yuke or Lilty because she hates anything that's different. She'll probably be calling Lilties and Yukes "freaks" throughout the entire game. Why can't she be more open-minded? Sorry. I went into a rant on personal stuff again. Sorry! bowbow Great fic! I hope to see more of it. But don't feel rushed! Only write in your spare time and when you feel like it. ^_^
Zacharies Ringweaver 2006-05-20 ch 4,	abuseNice chapter, I like the character's personalities. Very descriptive.
Zacharies Ringweaver 2006-01-01 ch 3,	abuseFun Person is the only one who's reviewing this? Too bad because it's a good story. I mean it, it has alot of potential to be a great fic. Keep going! Please! ( I suck a reviews don't I?)
Fun Person 2006-01-01 ch 3, anon.	abuselol. Kai arguing with a diary? lol. i'll call therpy. great chapter. Update
Fun Person 2005-12-27 ch 2, anon.	abusehey, really good chapter. I think that this group won't get too violent.background exploudes when Kai casts Firaga eer... nevermind. anyway... update!
Fun Person 2005-12-26 ch 1, anon.	abusehm. not bad. please update ASAP.

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