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| Lepa2793 2007-11-14 ch 1,  | abuseAww! Yami is so cute here! I love snow! YAY! LETS ALL GANG UP ON YAMI AND ATTACK HIM WITH SNOWBALLS INSTEAD OF PLAYING AGAINST HIM IN A CHILDREN'S CARD GAME! LOL HA HA! *Glomps Yami* Yami: NOT HER TOO! *screams, pushes Lepa2793 off, and runs behind a tree* |
| joanne 2006-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw that was so cute |
| 16forever 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseHalarious! I loved it! I always wondered what Yami would be like in the snow...Awesome job! |
| CosmicEssence 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseOMG! That was so cool! It took me so long to read I laughing and enjoying it that much. NO idea why but I'm in such a xmas mood at the moment even though its a little early ne? Its something with the YGO guys that I often forget, they come from Egypt...doesnt get cold or snow or ice...so of course it makes for a perfect story...showing these 50yrs old Yami's the wonders of the world like they were newborn ignorant infants! Great! You need a little work on spelling but otherwise its fine. |
| Roguex1979 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abuseAW! How cute! |
| yamiishot 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseaw thats sweet! |
| Cheeky-eyes 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abusehe he, wat a gr8 fic! poor yami! r u gonna update soul destruction soon? can u? ah well, gr8 fic!! |
| Moonlit Kaitou 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI loved it, this was so great!! ^^ And it was a great way to end it too, lol, I was laughing! And then the snowball fight, perfect! Tee hee, loved the fic bayleef, it was awesome and I enjoyed it! See ya latas for now and good luckilies! ^^ |
| Akira Tosiyama 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseYAY FOR YAMI! I love snow! |
| Pharaoh Star Yami 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseAww! ... I'd kill for a day in the snow with Yami...! I love snow! And I love Yami! What's not to like? The calling it "snowing" was just so sweet! Um... couple of spelling mistakes, is all. It affects him by having a calming effect on him. Those two are always a _biscuit_ (I can't remember if anything bad'll happen if I swear...) to get confused over. My friend does it all the time! Anyway, total cuteness!! Thanks so much! Definitely something of a change alright. Nollaig Shona!! |
| paigethereviewer 2005-12-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw! so cute! Diffinetly a nice break from the violence and insanity. |
| Midnight Promise 2005-12-24 ch 1, | abuseI loved this story. It was funny, cute, and I enjoyed reading it. You did some typos though. (Hate those things. . .) It was a very amusing story to read and you did an excellent job on every thing, especially the characters, but Joey really didnt have his accent. . . Anyway, great story, loved it. ^_^ Happy Holidays, InuNightWalker |
| Higuchimon 2005-12-24 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was so cute! I tend to have that reaction to any "Egyptian character discovers snow" since most of them really are! I enjoyed the presentation of everyone, and Atemu (sorry, I can't call him "Yami", I just can't) calling snow "snowing" was just...beautiful. It was also nice to see Anzu treated in a humane fashion. Well done! |
| yugirules 2005-12-24 ch 1, | abuseAw! So kawaii! That was so funny as well! And, I'm a bit surprised Joey and Yugi lost at the snowball fight...Anyways, good job! Kay |
| Ashla 2005-12-24 ch 1, | abuseHeehee, that was really cute! ^^ Lovely idea too. It's very different to what you have been writing lately too, heehee. Nice one May! Merry Christmas! (-Snuggles little dagger-) Slán slán! ~Ashla~ |