Wonderful!

I absolutely adored the ending about Malia, Nairi, and Cristal

A beautiful ending fit for a beautiful story

Nice Job!

This is amazing! I loved every bit of it! I'm so glad you updated this story! _ Anyway, there's something that is bothering me for the whole length of the fic. What of the old woman that Fuu met at the beginning of the story? You know, the one that helped her? I just had the feeling that she had a part on this story but I guess not... Hahahahahahaah, Well done, you always amaze me by creating epic stories like this and TotS... Although I gotta admit that I loved TotS more, maybe because of my favoritism in Umi's character (she's my favorite XD) Looking forward to Cry of the Flame!

It's beautiful!... I love the ending! It's so nice to know that Malia and the others got to have a second chance... So to say... I am completely contented at the ending of this fic... Nice job... Now I'm off to read the third one!

YOU CAUGHT ME COMPLETELY OFFGUARD MAN!

That never occured to me

Oh My Gosh

But it has gotten even weirder

If she's dead

Then how the hell did Fuu's spell worked on her?

Guess I'll have to figure it out NOW

OMG... That was amazing... So that was the purpose of Fuu's ability... You're so amazing... I did'nt expected that... So Malia is dead somehow?... Gotta read the rest...

Is it just me or Fuu is getting aggresive lately?

Not that I mind

I think it's cute

Hahahahahaha

Nice chapter by the way

Nice chapter... I initially prefered Nairi of the three "dark" magic knights but now i'm starting to like Malia... I'm starting to think that those girls are caught up in this just as Kagura is... I shall read the rest...

Oooooooh... So Malia's a bit undecided now... I wish Ascot would be a bit more aggresive... Hahahahaha... Can't have Umi taking the initiative all the time you know...

Awwww... Poor Amaya... What a sad story... I really like the relationship between the former knights... How they all argue about anything and everything yet still remain friends... So cute...

Waaaaaah

What a strange turn of events

I hope Amaya's okay

I like her character

And I love the way you had Umi and Fuu have a girl talk

For all the weird and heavy events going on

It's kind of refreshing

Now I'm off to read the rest

_

Nice chapter

I only started reading this recently

And I really love it!

I laughed so hard at the last part

Ferio actually passed out because of a fruit

Hahahahahahahaha

I am really starting to like the CalianaKannon pairing... If only they will admit it and get a clue... They're so cute... Looking forward to more...

Nice chapter in my opinion... I loved the part where Michiko was like "What did Amaya do now?"... XD... Amaya sure is quite the trouble-maker isn't she... Hahahahhahaha...

Wow... This is soooo cool... Looking forward to reading the rest of the story... Good job...

My heart lit up for about twenty-five seconds before the dial up finally came through… ; The frustrations of computer problems are well-understood, but still.. even if this chapter was supposed to leave us on an abrupt cliff-hanger, it still felt kind of rushed.

Usually everything out of you is so thrice da*ned wonderful and it was a thrill to see you'd updated again! It just seemed to go by so quickly in this chapter. The end with Malia and Fuu was sweet and now the girls have even more to worry about without Kagura even getting the mood-boost of kicking some... bad guy.. um... *shuts up and sets alerts for Cry of the Flame*

Be Safe, Fenris