 ChibiFrubaGirl 2008-01-04 . chapter 1Oh my GOD I'm SOBBING. I just- And he was DEAD- and I just- just- and Yama was all- Uncle Jyou's in HEAVEN?! WRRY DAMNIT?! WRY?!
No but seriously, as soon as I realized what'd happened I just lost it. Tears were STREAMING out of my eyes...
-sniffs and wipes face- Bravo~ TT^TT
*bliss* & F a V e S |
 Apple from Mars 2003-02-24 . chapter 1*sniff* That's so sad. *sob* I love your writing! Very, very, very, VERY good fic! |
 sq 2002-09-07 . chapter 1 great story!i think that its very sweet and it has a very good plot! |
 Carbon-Based Biped 2001-11-18 . chapter 1So...Jyou is dead...excuse me for a moment. *walks away, slams door. Assorted curse words, rumbling, and explosions. Walks back in* I liked it. It was very interesting, with a. . .unique twist. Yes...yes...well-written! Great! |
 Mystic Blossom 2001-09-26 . chapter 1Wanna know something funny? Rachel's my real name, and Lynn's my mom's name! (i love digimon too.) |
 The Dark Peregrine 2001-07-25 . chapter 1 Sweet...fluffy...very cute Yamajyou! ^^ |
 sine amorem 2001-06-02 . chapter 1Whoo... kinda creepy, cause I can't figure out for the life of me if Jyou-chan is dead or not... |
 Crazi.Neko 2001-06-02 . chapter 1> It was sooooo beautiful!!!!!! I didn't beleive Jyou was dead in the begining, but when the whole insurance money came up it was enough to make me cry... > Words can't describe the whole thing... The talking to the ghost... And Romany seeing Jyou's ghost was the most....... It was just sooooooo good!!!!!!!!
~*Lia |
 Natsu 2001-05-06 . chapter 1Oh no...that was sad. I figured that he was dead right at the start but I kept trying to think of ways that he might not be. Damn...Oh well. Good story. Even if it was really sad...oh, my poor baby! Uhm...I'll just say that Tai comes to help him look after the kids instead. That'll satisfy me for a while. ^^ I'm really into unusual pairings right now. You should try some more! You rock, never stop writing. |
 Finny 2001-05-04 . chapter 1*giggle* Rae, how is it we always manage to write stuff with people cutting themselves with knives and stuff like that? *grin* Not that that's a bad thing, 'cause I love it, just a little odd, that's all. Oh, yes, and I *love* that twist you gave it! In fact, I love it so much that I think I shall now go and *faint*! *grin* Either that or drool over my new GW stuff! Great job, gal! |
 shimmercat 2001-05-03 . chapter 1 Well, that was a surprize. I would write more, but I'm being yelled at. Keep writing fanfiction! I don't know what I would do without it! |
 StarCats 2001-05-03 . chapter 1 *the penny drops* Oh! Surprise ending, i love it! For a moment there i was getting a tad confused, but as soon as ending kicked in, everything just feel into place. ^^ I love the description of what Mimi's house is like...sounds just perfect for her,(i can see the carnage as well of kids in that kinda place). Oh and before i forget...*huggles Daisuke's sprog* Bless him ^^; Anyway, it's great! |
 Jin (being lazy) 2001-05-02 . chapter 1 Uwaaaah! *glomps* I started to suspect something halfway through, but I wasn't entirely sure until the last section. Only an author like you would be able to pull this off so wonderfully, Lynn-sama. (And! I should be working on my research paper right now. I can sympathize. XD;) |
 starsnake (too lazy to sign in) 2001-05-02 . chapter 1 Rae-chan, I ~know~ I already told you how much I love this, but other people need to see it, too. This is one of the strangest things I've ever seen from you... tell me you have more like it? I loved the characterization you gave to both Yamato and Jyou and how you only ever really hinted at Jyou's... state until the very end. Beautifully done. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. |
 Kay 2001-05-02 . chapter 1 ::stunned:: Okay... did not expect that ending.. but... it was BRILLIANT!!! ::sniffs:: God, very good. Made me cry once I realized.... gaaahh, so good! So VERY good!!! And Dai and TK- loved it, and I loved their child, god, good good fic... |