This was very funny. xD "She decided it was a bad sign that she thought HK was the best choice at this point" made me literally laugh out loud. (Though admittedly, Atton wearing nothing but a pazaak deck doesn't sound too bad to me...)

Silence fell. (Both Jedi were able to dodge it, however.)

LOL! XD

hahaha!
insanely hilarious fic!

lol

Very cute! And fun to read. I love the contrivance of the stalker/chocolate-chase. What a plot! (In a very good way, of course.)

The writing is also at its best when your quirky, self-conscious humor really show through. Lines like: "Jada was a PC, for crying out loud. Poor girl was just asking for abuse." -Or- "But Atton was a fairly easy-going man, and he’d take his suddenly-realized fantasies in whatever form they came to him." -Or- "Jada frowned and locked it, thus increasing the difficulty of getting through by 1d10." just make me laugh, and I loved reading them. I really enjoyed the originality of your writing when you parody the game, and you manage to make even old jokes (D10 DC) seem fresh and new and funny all over again.

Great moments of characerization when you have Kavar leaving with the candy in his arms "like a lost child," or when Jada imagines her stalkers waiting for her... begging the reader to consider the depths of what is truly worse? "Bao-Dur asking her to wear the shorts he seemed so obsessed... or Atton wearing nothing but a pazaak deck." Your Jada is both charming and witty, and sympathetic in all the madness. Hilarious turns from all the other characters too (I could go on pulling favorite quotes form this piece, but you know what you wrote). Thanks so much for sharing!

HAHAHAHA!! That's really funny! Poor stalkers, getting handed over to... them... Very nice work!

Even though this entire fic is basically an inside joke, I thought it was super funny. :D
Made meh laugh...props to you! Yay!

This has got to be one of the best oneshots I've ever read! It is so funny and well written! I especially like the part about Mical writing bad poetry...I can totally seeing him do that! But I love Mical so it would probably be good poetry to me! The end just cracks me up ever time I read it, being a fangirl myself, I know what's gonna happen to them...poor Atton, Mical, Bao...Hk...lol!

Hilarious.

Absolutely hilarious.

XD I love the General Hotpants thing, and the ending had me in stitches.

I remember the #10 quote from somewhere! ((throws fists into air)) It was good! Props to you! Merry Christmas!

xD Very, very good.
-snuggles Atton and Kavar- bless them =3
This made me laugh ^^ Keep up the good work.
Merry Christmas!
x

*screams with laughter* OMIGOSH! This is the funniest thing I've read in a LONG LONG time! I was shattering windows with my high pitched laughing! Brilliant job with the whole "General Hotpants" thing, XD and Mical writing bad poetry! >_< Poor Disciple! He's so unloved! *squeezes Disciple plushie* Anyway, PLEASE continue this! Just too funny to be allowed!
Merry Xmas!
Adrieal Kenobi x x x