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| Reigning Fyre 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseWONDERFULLY written! ::claps:: |
| ChopPrincess 2007-04-15 ch 1, | abuseThis chapter entertained me ever so much XD |
| Lady GryphonInia 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseElisa? In a sexy bunny suit? with bunny ears? I guess, I dropped off my chair with obvious sirprise ^_^ Cool story. loved it! |
| jess 2006-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood writing, i enjoyed the story very much. I'm a huge fan of Goliath and Elisa and i like how you portrayed their relationship. It's also cute to imagine Goliath as her fiance, although i was kinda cringing at the end when they did the deed. Kinda squirmish because they're different species lol. Also some parts of the story made me laugh out loud, such as: "Something had caught her, something immense, with quick reflexes and the scent of stars and ozone" I know you're talking about Goliath but it's just so funny that you described him to smell like ozone. I didn't know ozone had a smell lol. |
| El Varon 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abuseInteresting story, here. It was kinda funny, seeing Tony treated as littlemore than a ragdoll. |