 suikodengel 2/19/12 . chapter 8Oh great can I said I love you?You make fiction about my most bias couple in Suikoden II *wink* we all can see that Camus have intered in Nanami since he saw her in Muse City huh...you really a great author I eventually cried reading this and you why don't you write I love you there hehe..hope you can make another fiction about CamusxNanami couple ) |
 Alien9999 9/25/03 . chapter 8It really a sad ending
i wish they would be together
BUT I REALLY LIKE THIS FIC |
 Delita-chan 8/12/02 . chapter 8*SOB* WAAAHH! Why'd it have to be that way? I have gotten well into the game and I do see a bit of Camus/Nanami going on and I'm glad you wrote this. I especially loved the end, where neither of them said "it" out loud, but we know what they said. You wrote this SO WELL. Now write another one, this time with a happy ending -. Please? I like the Camus/Nanami romance! |
 littlemaiko 11/21/01 . chapter 1 Ah, so this is how I answer to reviews. Good.
Seeyousucker, I'd love to have my story recommended at your site. Thank you so much for the offer!
Jonathan L, I have followed your advise and omitted all Japanese references. I hope the story's more natural in telling now.
Avalon, thank you so much for an extensive review! I was intrigued by how intensely you read my story. That was definitely the first time anyone ever did that. I really appreciate it.
For everyone else, thank you all for the reviews. Kasou was my first submission to FFNet and I was very self-conscious because there are so many good stories posted here. I was afraid that nothing that I post would receive a review, but tada, it did! So many responses, too! Without your encouragements, I will try to write more stories as good as or better than this one. Thank you so much! |
 Jonatan L 9/7/01 . chapter 8'Tis nice to see something written with a little bit more emotion for once... and this does have a lot of emotion in it. That is a good thing. Feels a bit awkward with Japanese words in an English text though... |
 nina marie 8/31/01 . chapter 8 THAT was the BEST fic i have ever read in my WhOLE ENTIRE LIFE!
it made me cry, SOOOOO inspiaring and soooooo sad i wanna go scream my heart out! |
 Avalon 7/23/01 . chapter 8 As much as I hate the outcome (Nanami ends up dead), this is still a beautifully written fic. As I've mentioned over and over again, I love your poetic descriptions. They literally breathe life into the fic. It's heartbreaking though, especially the last scene... you intergrated it very well with the lyrics of "Kasou". And the last lines, exchanged between Camus and Nanami... that was very moving... And your amazing descriptions added extra effects to touch your audience. Overall, this is a very very well written fic. I hope to read more fics from you in the future. _ |
 Avalon 7/23/01 . chapter 5 I knew it, I knew it! The cherry tree brought Nanami back to life and it's taking her away again! This sucks! Not the fic, it's very well written, I assure you. Just the situation. Burn the tree or chop it down! Do anything to save Nanami's life. (As you can see, I'm one of those who became really depressed when Nanami died in the game.) |
 Avalon 7/23/01 . chapter 4 Ahhh! Nooo! You can't do that! She has to stay alive! This will be too depressing if she ends up being revived by the cherry tree and die again later! Argh! No more reviews, I must continue reading this until the end. Though I must add that your descriptions are wonderful again. I especially love this line, "Flowery scent filled the corridor, and that was the end of Camus' waking dream." It's so poetic! _ |
 Avalon 7/23/01 . chapter 3 Wahh! Miklotov's reaction to Nanami being alive is absolutely hilarious! *lol* And Camus... He's definitely one happier knight now! _ Though confused, I must say that I like your change to the ending. (I got the bad one where both Jowy and Nanami died and STAYED dead. *grumbles*) I can understand Nanami's insecurities to this whole turn of event. And it'll be interesting to see how Hisui reacts to Nanami's "death" in the future chapters. |
 Avalon 7/23/01 . chapter 2 Once again, another very well written chapter. I really like the flow of emotions in both Camus and Miklotov when they heard of the "imposter". And the re-introduction of Nanami is perfect! This is exactly how I would imagine her reunion with the Matilda knights would be. I love her smile! A smile of hers is worth more than anything! |
 Avalon 7/23/01 . chapter 1 Wow! I'm really impressed. I haven't been reading much Suikoden 2 fics from FFN but I must say this is really good. Both Camus and Nanami are very in character and you didn't over-romanticize anything (which I found to be a problem in other Suikoden fics). The mood you've set-up in the 2nd scene is perfect. I could feel the sadness radiating from Camus through your descriptions. Wow! Double wow! Okay, gonna go read the next chapter now. _ |
 Mercury Hime 7/13/01 . chapter 8That was so beautiful and poetic. |
 Trigs 7/7/01 . chapter 8This was SO good. It's sad and touching. I love it! |
 anonymous 5/5/01 . chapter 6 This definitely has got to be continued! Great story, and with hopefully a happy ending? Or not, whichever, wonderfully written. |