Wow. I never thought of rain that way. Now I probably will. Excellent one-shot.

Aww... very good! I think you did a good job getting inside Toboe's mind, and showing his thoughts. A simple, yet elegant, piece. I'd like to see you write more like this. Good job!

That was absolutly beautiful, really a moving story, especially that last line. Loved it, Toboe is so cute. Made me miss Wolf's Rain all over again.

Very nice. I liked it alot. _