I reallY LikE thIs fic kEeP gOinG anD wrItE mOrE

*squeals* Cute!

ah man, this was so swet. I really think there should be more hitsu/matsu. I myself is a fan of hitsugaya and i have read most of the stories with him and there really should be more ^^

Haha. This is what I call short and sweet :D Great work and keep it up (write more HitsuxMatsu)! Happy Holidays!

The way you write it, it seems as if this pairing IS possible... XP I actually prefer them having a brother-sister sort of realtionship, but this was a good try. I actually see Matsumoto doing something like this to tease him. Haha. XD

Constructive Criticism: Your sentences are choppy; try to vary your sentence structures a bit by adding some description to them. ^_^ Watch your punctuation, too... With a bit of practice, I'm sure you'll get the hang of it. Keep up the writing and Merry Christmas to you as well. ^_^