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Reviews for: Ethereal Remains
autobotgirl12328
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
awsome story...future stories are always cool!
The Emerald Shapeshifter
2007-10-16 . chapter 1
It made me cry... I love this!
Songbird21
2006-07-12 . chapter 1
Aw. That was so sad, yet sweet. Nice one Navie. :)
Gijinka Renamon
2006-01-11 . chapter 1
Aw... cute! Me likey! ^_^
Jazzy Kat
2005-12-30 . chapter 1
I thought it was cute... I like the...what's it called? Detail...or maybe its something like that. I really liked how this one played out. If you know what I mean.
Youkomon
2005-12-29 . chapter 1
Aw...sweet. I remember this one. Angsty forum drabbles...ah, those were the days! Anyhow, good characterisation of Antauri as he isn't always the easiest character to write. I'm especially glad that you included his wry humour at one point, OI believe it was when he was recalling how Chiro began his path of becoming a hero? The statues were a nice mecahism for allowing the children's focus to go over to the past and like the way you didn't just use it to get on to the whole 'recollection' thing and never mention it again; no, you got the little kids to interact with it by touching it and presenting how the story had moved them.
I'm not totally happy with the whole reincarnation part though, it seemed to lesser the whole impact of how Antauri had made Choiro and Jinmay an immortal part of his heart, especially since he is the one monkey to fully understand the finalty of death. It just seemed to defy the whole point of berivement and how their memories would live on while their bodies could not. But that's just me. Nobody else seems to care so I wouldn't worry about it too much.
...Whoa...long review...(dies)
Beastfire
2005-12-26 . chapter 1
Awesome story!
Alchemy Hope
2005-12-26 . chapter 1
That was very beautiful Navie. Wonderful one-shot. For some reason, I believe there could be a story beneath this heart-warming piece of work. I hope you make another story soon.
RobotMonkeys4Ever
2005-12-26 . chapter 1
AW, that's so sweet. I love it Navie. Aw... No really its beautiful. *wipes a tear from my own eye*
Lmann
2005-12-26 . chapter 1
So great! O... reincarnation... COOL!
Shiny Pichu-chan
2005-12-25 . chapter 1
It was awesome on the forum and its still awesome here. Wonderful job as always Navie!!
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono
2005-12-25 . chapter 1
Cute! I love it! Such a cute story. Poor Antauri. he misses Chiro and Jinmay. so cute! write more soon!
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