 autobotgirl12328 2009-01-25 . chapter 1awsome story...future stories are always cool! |
 The Emerald Shapeshifter 2007-10-16 . chapter 1It made me cry... I love this! |
 Songbird21 2006-07-12 . chapter 1Aw. That was so sad, yet sweet. Nice one Navie. :) |
 Gijinka Renamon 2006-01-11 . chapter 1Aw... cute! Me likey! ^_^ |
 Jazzy Kat 2005-12-30 . chapter 1I thought it was cute... I like the...what's it called? Detail...or maybe its something like that. I really liked how this one played out. If you know what I mean. |
 Youkomon 2005-12-29 . chapter 1Aw...sweet. I remember this one. Angsty forum drabbles...ah, those were the days! Anyhow, good characterisation of Antauri as he isn't always the easiest character to write. I'm especially glad that you included his wry humour at one point, OI believe it was when he was recalling how Chiro began his path of becoming a hero? The statues were a nice mecahism for allowing the children's focus to go over to the past and like the way you didn't just use it to get on to the whole 'recollection' thing and never mention it again; no, you got the little kids to interact with it by touching it and presenting how the story had moved them.
I'm not totally happy with the whole reincarnation part though, it seemed to lesser the whole impact of how Antauri had made Choiro and Jinmay an immortal part of his heart, especially since he is the one monkey to fully understand the finalty of death. It just seemed to defy the whole point of berivement and how their memories would live on while their bodies could not. But that's just me. Nobody else seems to care so I wouldn't worry about it too much.
...Whoa...long review...(dies) |
 Beastfire 2005-12-26 . chapter 1Awesome story! |
 Alchemy Hope 2005-12-26 . chapter 1That was very beautiful Navie. Wonderful one-shot. For some reason, I believe there could be a story beneath this heart-warming piece of work. I hope you make another story soon. |
 RobotMonkeys4Ever 2005-12-26 . chapter 1AW, that's so sweet. I love it Navie. Aw... No really its beautiful. *wipes a tear from my own eye* |
 Lmann 2005-12-26 . chapter 1So great! O... reincarnation... COOL! |
 Shiny Pichu-chan 2005-12-25 . chapter 1It was awesome on the forum and its still awesome here. Wonderful job as always Navie!! |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2005-12-25 . chapter 1Cute! I love it! Such a cute story. Poor Antauri. he misses Chiro and Jinmay. so cute! write more soon! |