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SesshyLover-cha
2008-02-25 . chapter 1
Yay! I found an HatoriArisa Fic! go me, go me, go-- sorry. I like this pairing. Good job!



~SesshyLover-cha
Yumiko-Hime
2007-06-27 . chapter 1
this is only like my FAVOURITE pairing xD lol are u thinking of writing more? i'm love to read more =D
Evil Plushie Queen
2006-05-26 . chapter 1
AW! That's adorable! I love it! YOU ROCK DUDE! Could you make a sequeal? Please? Please? *puppy dog eyes* for *sniff* me? I'll give you a cookie. Wait, i'm giving you a cookie right now because i love your story!! Please make a sequeal!
Isabelle Adamowitz
2006-03-12 . chapter 1
hey.
This is cute. I came across this and remembered reading "In the elevator" a few years ago and thought "Hmm, looks interesting". Well, I'm not disappointed. I really like your take on Arisa and Hatori and this makes a wonderful oneshot.
Isa
Hatori's Melted Snow
2006-03-07 . chapter 1
cool! that is a very intersting pair! love ya, -hatoris' melted snow-
Pink Eraser
2006-02-07 . chapter 1
haha! that's fabulous! XD the OOC-ness I could see was her dad, who struck me as a real jerk, but then, maybe that's too much fanfiction talking...

^_^ I love your Hatori stories.

XD Hatori would so do that, take Uo for a drive I mean. he's insane, but he's good at hiding it.
SunMoonAndSpoon
2005-12-25 . chapter 1
Aw. That was pretty cute, though I think you were a wee bit OOC with Hatori...he's not so chatty as all that. But you really nailed Uo-chan. This was a very sweet story, and very fun to read.
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