That was awesome! I was so excited to see that there was more than one chapter! The second chapter confused me at first, as I thought it was Reno's stream of consciousness, but once I figured out it was Yuffie, it all made sense. The last chapter was good, too, even though I was a little confused at first with all of the flashbacks. Naughty, naughty Vincent!

With his stupid unicorn hairstyle and his ‘I’m-obviously-compensating-for-something’ giant-ass sword.

made me snort and i'm getting funny looks for it. that's what i get for taking the laptop to a coffee shop i guess, eh?

Really great job, i loved it. ^__^

yay yuffie! I loved it, her mind is so interesting ^_^ great job

again, wonderful ending, so cute! Youre a really talented writer, keep it up.

hahah i loved this chapter and cannot wait for the update!

-T

Wow that is HILARIOUS, i loved how scatterbrained Yuffie was it was such a great drunk perception of her.

My favorite part was the countdown. GEEZ lady fix your top. hahahaha i laughed out loud

-T

Very awesome! But I wanna know what Vincent wrote! It's driving me nuts! Anyways...great chapter...hope you do another one soon!^^

Until then! Huggles!^_^

Sincerely,
DragonGirl323

Cute, very cute. Just what I needed in my loneliness. XD

Hm hm hm. . .your style is very. . .dare I say tangy? But it is amusing to read. I am enjoying it, and that is enough. . .

So. . .thanks to that you're now on my favorite author's list. I decided I like your style, for what it's worth, and I think you portray the characters rather well.

I LOVE IT.

XD I love Vincent. And Reno. Heh heh heh.

Will there be more? *gives Savvy Savie plate of cookies*

AHAHHA Tifa's mental thoughts as Reno kissed her had me in stitches!! Such a load of fluff, I'm gonna have cavities. You ought to be a novelist! ^__^

Hehe.. You got me laughing there, especially the last part. Vincent. Who would've thought? ;P Awesome stuff. Great job.

VERY bad, but good all the same. xD Liked it.