that was real nice

Well this was interesting. What a different concept, portraying a different yet believable future. All those Saiyan differences were bound to take a toll sooner or later; the longevity issue really makes sense, especially from someone like Goku's perspective. I really like what you did with the characters. Well done!

I really like the idea of this, from the background story through to the friendship Vegeta and Kakarot have. It's well written too :) Well done!

Very interesting read here.

omg omg omg this is GREAT! You're style of writing is really easy to read, and i'm dying for more I hope you'll continue the story I'll be waiting

omg that was so wonderful!

please write more! I love the idea you have and i certainly hope you will write more _

i like it-its different-works for me lol love the opening chapter, i'll be looking forward to ur next :)

That was a really good story. I always thought it was weird that Vegeta and Bulma ended up to together. Your story I really like. That was bad grammer wasn't it? Please keep on writing Dude. Oh,hope you had a Merry Chritmas.

Um...

Who are these guys, and what have they done to Vegeta and Kakarot?

I really liked your story, it seems quite interesting, please update soon, for all of the random readers...

Also, you might want to change the summary... it seems a bit bland in comparison to the rest of the story... I personally don't mind, but you may, infact, get more readers...

People perform/'live'/exist/act/think on different frequencies, you know. I read another fanfic writer today, who wrote intense, complicated, beautiful stories. You, however, write more subtly; more mellowed-out than the other author. Still beautiful, mind. Perhaps you're female, and he's male? I think. No matter, since I'm gender-confused, schitzophrenic, and all-round mentally disturbed. I wasn't expecting much more than a sloppy fanfic when I clicked on your story. You REALLY, REALLY have to get a better summary/blurb/read-up/preview. What's the enticement? You think I (and countless others) click on boring read-ups? Your story was cool, but your 'blurb' was not cool enough to be the 'headpiece' of your story. Judging books by their covers is mainstream these days, so you should at at least make sure your 'book' has a fascinating 'cover' to match the story. Make it as interesting as the fic allows! Please keep updating. Vegeta all 'genteel' with age? How on earth? I like the notion, nonetheless. Very original. Please give us (me and all of your readers) an idea of what's happened in your story... I mean, 'King Vegeta?' I at least need to know how that ocurred, and whether this is the same Vegeta we all know and love/hate, or his father. And now, I must congratulate you for not making this fic 'anonymous reviewers disabled'. Very smart move. Keep it up, love and peace to you. Merry Christmas! (And a Happy New Year) LOL! I'm a Grinch, in case you didn't know, but: seasonal greetings and salutations nonetheless. lol.