 tanith-4486 2006-12-02 . chapter 9How cool! |
 CastaS 2006-10-15 . chapter 9great story, i enjoyed it. |
 spacedout86 2006-02-28 . chapter 9Awesome fic! I am so glad Shego finally relaized that she could love him. ^^ |
 Malonami 2006-02-03 . chapter 9YAY! WOOT! ECT! great! YAY! |
 juneroses 2006-01-01 . chapter 9I printed this out and read it beginning to end last night while at a friends house. It's very good and really touching. I really love Shekken (lol) fanfictions. You're a very talented writer and this story (although it had some confusing moments) was overall very well done. Perfect read for the Holidays. Hope you've had a Happy New Year.
-Juneroses |
 lordshego 2005-12-25 . chapter 8Aw! This is such an adorable story. |
 Chibi-Zion 2005-12-25 . chapter 9Just a few minor things that bugged me in a creepy way.
Drakken is a peer to James Possible [Kim's father]. Kim and Shego at best have a few years difference between them. That means that Drakken is actually old enough to be Shego's father. Just wanted to point it out, because thirty-five seems a bit young.
Anyways, the story was pretty good. Nice to see effectively written pining. Disliked the convienince of Shego finding out Kim/Ron where dating. Though that might be due to personal tastes.
Liked big coming to the senses bit. It works pretty well. Trust me, I've written enough of them already. XP
Didn't really need the nineth chapter. It seemed rushed and wasn't really needed. Not to mention I personally don't agree with the pairings, but that again is personal preference.
Overall the fic is well written, and contains all the right stuff for a good fic.
Even if I don't agree with the pairings. XP |
 Invader Thing 2005-12-25 . chapter 9That was a nice ending. 9 reviews in a row?! You better believe it! |
 Invader Thing 2005-12-25 . chapter 8gah That was the best ending ever! I loved this story that was so sweet and the entire thing felt so in character. Marvy job! |
 Invader Thing 2005-12-25 . chapter 7a year?! whoah that took me by surprise but I really like that. Puts a totally different spin on your story. |
 Invader Thing 2005-12-25 . chapter 6eek, I do believe tears may have started to well up. That was so sad but I think I might have an idea to why Shego is smiling, damn, I'm so glad I didn't read ahead! |
 Invader Thing 2005-12-25 . chapter 5yay that was a heart warming chapter. This would all be even more perfect if it was Christmas...oh wait...it is! XD |
 Invader Thing 2005-12-25 . chapter 4haha that's adorable. I wish the snow here wasn't all old and gross, I want to go make one myself. |
 Invader Thing 2005-12-25 . chapter 3You're doing a really good job at getting in Shego's and Drakken's heads.
wow that sounds a little creepy but I'm sure you know what I mean. Another fabulous chapter. |
 Invader Thing 2005-12-25 . chapter 2haha Maybe he can learn to love Johnson too, it is the season for miracles.
awesome chapter |