Really nice, and it's good to see a Ranma that's come to realize that his actions have consequences, both good and hurtful. Enjoyed the waffy moment between the two, and looking forward to this and everything else that you write.

Interesting part here, and looking forward to what's going to happen in the next part as well.

unreadable. needs to be reformatted

I think your formating got eaten...

baiken only has one arm and hand. why do you continue to put in there that baiken is using two hands?

please fix.

Great story. Great pairings.

Very good chapter.

Nice start.