Can't stop sobbing. Excelent story, one of the best I ever read. Very different but still loyal about the original.

THat was an amazing story!.

Most definetly the best i've read so far.
Well done.

You made me cry. That was so damn sad. I felt so bad for Sky. Poor Bridgey, but I understand why you killed him off. Wonderfully written.

OH... that was so cute!!...
But i still hate you for killing Bridge... - -U
Anyway, keep writing... you are great!! (But try not to kill Bridge next time n_n)

Aw! That was such a sweet and tender moment. I personally thought you wrote it well. This story is definitely very unique considering that it's a Power Rangers story, but I'm glad for its uniqueness. It's very refreshing. Good job! ;)

Aw! This was SO sad! It was very well written. Poor Bridge died! Poor Sky losing his best friend! I was in the middle of reviewing this when my computer spontaneously shut down. Stupid computer! Nicely done. This is going on my favorite stories list for sure.

Oh wow. I loved this fic. It was an interesting idea based on one of my fave song and so realistic! Poor Bridge! My heart was in my mouth for most of it - I really felt Sky's pain and helplessness. Only one criticism is some of the grammer, eg. 'Bridges uniform', but actually there wasn't that many and you can't get them all lol! Really really enjoyed this story. Well done!

World War 2, huh? Interesting take on SPD. But you killed Bridge! GR... :)

You definitely did not need the song lyrics in there -- this was strong enough to stand on its own and, in my experience, song lyrics don't help a piece. If anything, they distract readers who don't know the song (like me). I'd have just quoted my favorite part of the song at the beginning.

With that said, this was a really strong piece and an interesting experiment in putting the characters in a different place and time. You worked Syd in as the romance, Jack as their squad leader... the only thing I was missing was Z. You translated their relationships from the series to WWII and I think it came off relatively well.

This seemed a bit choppy at the beginning and I feel that the relationship between Sky and Syd was not as developed as the one between Sky and Bridge. In fact, you probably could have cut that romance and just had Sky lost in thought at the beginning to set the scene. (And then you wouldn't have the problem of where Z got to.) However, once they left for battle, things began to really flow smoothly -- very poignant, powerful writing there.

You also evoked the emotions Sky would be feeling well. I got the nervousness of Bridge -- his inexperience and how that was to be his downfall. You could see their deep bond and, for me at any rate, there were parts that were completely tear-jerking.

Nice work! Just don't be afraid to cut out sub-plots that don't seem to be working. :)

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that was good. it brought a tear to my eye.

O! Excellent! I absolutly love that song! And you've done such justice to it! I love it ^^

Okay...I have to say I cried with this story. This story is good. I don't like that Bridge died, but it had to happen I guess. The story is a tear jearker.

I hope you write more happier stories soon!