This seemed rather Christmasy ish, 'cause of the "bah humbug" (either that, or you've listened to 'Light my Candle' one too many times [; ) but either way, I decided it would get me in the Christmas spirit! Plus it's a oneshot, so I'll be able to fall asleep. Haha. Next on my list is the Friendship Bracelets. It sounds cute! Haha. Anyway. Back to the story.

You wrote Snape PERFECTLY. He was the best Scrooge-ish character I've read since Dickens way back when. Haha. I DO, however, think that I'm going to steal parts of your story (sh! Don't tell!!) and make my own renovation. Haha. I'll get around to it... before I turn 20. Err. In ten or so years [:
Haha. But really, that was great! Haha. Now I'm ready for some snow... (crosses fingers) I wouldn't mind not having school or something...

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Emma

are you actually going to do more of this, or are just going to stop? a word of advice: for the ghost of christmas future, you should do a dementor.

Nah, it rocks! "Potter Brat Number Two"...*sniggers*
Awesome writing, update soon!

FIN.

Thank u

-LeonaKat

Really good and funny. i really pity snape. update soon pls

Yay! Grumpy Sevvie is back! I do feel bad for him, evil James! (Bad James! No chocolate frogs!) Anyway, last chapter was a little funnier, but I love Myrtle as the ghost! I can't wait to see who the next one will be! Update soon!

love,
~*estee*~

Excellent, as everything of yours tends to be! I love the concept and the way you've carried it out thusfar. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Happy writing~

I liked it. I'm reviewing. WRITE MORE!

I really like it... those eleven-year-olds can do some pretty advanced magic, can't they?

Snape is so in love with Lily. :) Awesome chapter! I liked all the flashbacks; they seemed very realistic. Especially the one with Snape's mom and dad. It almost made me feel sorry for him. (that's hard to do cuz I hate snape)

whow this is realirealireali good! i read this after the friendship bracetlet for the de's it its realirealireali good 2! update soon!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, I LOVED THIS! "Were you PMSing when you died?!" From SNAPE?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I can't believe he actually knew what PMSing was...unless he was a really horny teen... *Cackles*

"My wife's having a baby."

Best line yet. =D The first bit with Snape and his parents is good ... Tobias is scary. :shudders: And I don't think Myrtle managed to knock any Christmas spirit into him. :giggles:

Lol, very funny, I liked it. Really can't wait for another update!

it's good, only problem is it took harry until like fourth year until he learned dueling spells like protego. granted, sirius and james are probly a lot brighter than harry was but they still wouldnt really know this sort of thing after their first semester, would they?