You sure this isn't a tad bit on the humor side? Because Grossman and Ponch's antics sure remind me of it...like the episode of Starsky and Hutch when they heard the bears.
Gabe B. 2003-11-02 . chapter 1
Wow! Great story! Kinda creepy, but very cool! I especially liked that bit at the end about the blood-stained floor boards being replaced. It had a very ominous effect! Keep up the great work!