This is simply beautiful *sigh*

It gave me warm fuzzy feelings ^_^ Great job!

I don't really know this pairing really well..but that was cute!

That was absolutely adorable. I am filled with warm and fuzzy feelings on the inside, although any good Kakashi/Rin fanfic does that to me :)

Just a few things I noticed:

[A part of her remains concern] I believe it should be "A part of her remains concerned."

[(he’ll never understand the female gender, he suppose).] Just another minor glitch. The word 'suppose' should have an s on the end.

what a tear jerker love it aw!

aw.. so cute and fluffy!! :)

Aww I seriously love this story. I'm adding it to my favorites list. I'll be looking out for more work by you. Keep writting, many will always enjoy it.

Happy Holidays

aw! THAT WAS CUTE!! but i have a question
is this when they are older? and did Rin
ever die... or was she missing for a long
time?

tis story is really warm & sweet.it put a smile on my face = )

A FIC FOR ME?!

*speechless ... (for once)*
*SQUEAL*

AW!! No one ha ever ever done such a thing!! I'm so THRELLED!!
*hugs hugs hugs*

*rubbing hands together*
he-hee, hopefully I'll be the first one to review my own dedicated

Ahem, let's see ...

Ah, very nice mysterious beginning, that's the way! That's pretty, but you shouldn't have bluntly said "it's snowing", you should integrate the fact that it _IS_ snowing into the territory around our favourite silver-haired Jounin, you know what I'm blabbering about

*sees the net "It's snowing"*
...
ok, I take it back, I see what you're doing ...

CUTE!
This part with Rin(?) was very cute

*reads third paragraph*
*SNORT*
don't make me laugh, Kakashi is actually trying to beat the _time_?? My goodness, he's making an effort to be on time for once??
Come on, SC, what force on earth can propel him to do such a thing?? *huge evil grin - SC has learned the power possessed by an evil woman who was once kept waiting*

Ah yes ... there really is no celebrating birthdays and Christmases for the hard-working Elite are there? And there is no doubt Kakashi does work very hard

Their lives as their Christmas presents?
Wow, what force _IS_ suddenly working in him? Ordinarily, there is no hesitation to kill, is it not ... that terrible rule of war, ' show them no mercy because they will give you none'

*PT is slow. PT only realises the brilliance of your section openings*
*bows down humbly*
I take back everything, I didn't realise you had the bigger picture in mind, I kiss your feet, I am humbled

Ah yes, of course even the Fouth for all his big-heartedness wouldn't have thought of taking his students to Christmas dinner ...
*knew all along it HAD to have been done by a woman's suggestion - well, of course!*
Aw, that was sweet!

So there are that many casualties in the hospital Christmas Eve, is it? Yep yep, isn't it always that way?!

*gapes*
AW!
...
you know I should just shut up and not review, you're totally leaving me speechless here!
Not only do you have repeating section openings, but the themes within as well - "their lives"
That's lovely, SC, both of them doing things they really didn't want to, but on hindsight (to quote yourself) they realise what they were forced to do was for the good of more than just themselves ...

*smirks*
"hoping that he isn't late ..." "hoping that he's not hurt" may just come to mean the same thing, ne?

AW this part was so CUTE!
But it's still shocking, that Kakashi is now keeping a close eye on the clock?!

and are you sure that he just "left" the room? *smirk* are you sure you didn't mean, "he tries to look as if he wasn't rushing"?

KAWAI
Can just imagine that guy standing there looking all soft with flowers!! I love flowers!! AW

...
*SC you just wrecked the romantic moment by mentioning the height difference ...*

*end of fic*
*speechless*

That ... was a LOVELY ending sentence!!

AH!! And to think this was dedicated to me! That, to me, is like having given me beautiful flowers

THANK YOU SO MUCH!

I LOVED IT!!

Aww ... and Merry Merry Christmas to you too! *although it's perhaps a bit late by now ... * BUT STILL!!

Thank you so much