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| 1m4n 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseOkay, well-written and all, but why do you have to put the word 'Muslim' as a pre-fix for the word assassin? You represented the steorotypical Muslim--a terrorist. Yes, stereotype. And you can't trust stereotypes. Again, well-written, but what you wrote I don't like. |
| PurpleYin 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseA very interesting short. Kind of chilling,but good insight into Khan's work. He's definitely dedicated. |