LOVED IT UPDATE SOON

please ud soon! i really like this story and i cant wait for u to contine!

ok that chapter was to easy. i mean too drama free. which means i think someone has some sneakyness up there sleave and stuff is going to hit the fan in the next one. i love drama too, as long as my brathan get freaky in the end. haha. oh yeah and just leave that cookie in the pool. i will come and get it. i could use some sunshine during this horrible cold snowy winter. you know i am not so sure you tried really hard to get that cookie to me. but i forgive you cause i know you were working really hard on writing brathan for me. also, i am going to check out your new story. i will review on it as soon as i am caught up!

i love the story! I love brooke and nathan they are so cute together! i cant wait to see what happens next! update soon!

Brook

oh, this was so God damn cute:D:D

I love it Brathan is happy. But I notied there was no Haley which means she must be sitting at home brewing up some evil scheme to take Nathan away. I love how they talked and got to know each other. And I am glad Nathan stood up to Lucas. He is going to flip out when he learns Lucas likes Brooke. And how is Peyton going to feel if Lucas goes out with her and learns he is using her to get to Brooke? Drama, drama, drama. Now where is my cookie? I want a big warm Macadamian nut cookie and you have to get it all the way to Michigan. So get to tossin!

Why are there troublemakers everywhere? Why can't Brooke and Nathan just be happy? I mean why all of a sudden now do Lucas and Haley have to decide they have feelings for these two. You have to make sure Brathan is strog enough to withstand there attempts to break them up.

I'm glad that you're using quotation marks to indicate dialogue but the story is still in script format and that isn't allowed on this site. Drop the names before the dialogue to solve this problem. You also seem to be using your incorrectly. In some places the your should be you're. I think you have a good start but you have some things to work on also.

PLEASE, pretty please ud soon.. i want to know more:D:D

Nice Story! Please updat soon!

HEY! UPDATE THIS SOON! I IS REALLY GOOD

loved it..update soon..nathan and brooke are so adorable together...

Yay another Brathan fic, I love them :)

Ud soon

I LOVE BATHAN BUT IM A HUGEE LEYTON FAN I HOPE WE HAVE SOME LEYTON HERE ;] PLZ UPDATE

please write more. ;)