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| Tuume 2007-11-26 ch 1,  | abuseI hope that you write a sequal. This was lengthy and interesting. I like that. |
| crystalbutterfly23 2007-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story! We need more good COTS fanfiction like this one here at SC. |
| Nemeus 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abusegreat but i hate the way abelia is always so stuck up in the game yknow? |
| F4S4N 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseWow! Just three words can describe this fanfiction: VERY WELL DONE! Besides, I need more words to describe my point of view: First of all, the style is really good and the descriptions of the persons are quite superb. I could really imagine Kira and the others (though I knew them already)... The descriptions of the feelings were really good, too. I never liked Abelia (I really hated her while playing CotS...), but maybe I'll have to change my mind. She seems to be nice... Finally, one mote thing: DO ANOTHER CotS-FANFICTION! PLEASE... (maybe more details about Riese and Euridyce or about Luna...) |
| Alexander - Godslayer 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is definitly the best SC Yuri fanfic I read so far! Thanks for writing such beatiful fic!! The history was really well build, and Kira since like a good character. The only problem is that, acording to Abelia's and Strife's official biografy, it is clear that the main character is actually a man, but what the hell! This is a fanfic! Kira is welcome!! ^o^ Great job! ;) |
| LedaalLeda 2006-02-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseA wonderful story, with just one nitpick: I don't believe Abelia was ever the Heroine's commander. Beyond that, good work. |
| SapphireWolfMaster 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseVery good detail throughout the story, describing the characters' attire. Although I disagree with the pairing, I liked the detail. Nice job. |
| Jenny 2006-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story! I really enjoyed it ^_^ |
| Deathblade Prime 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abuseIt's about time somebody wrote a fic like this. I liked it, it was sweet, funny at some times, and loving. And I've been thinking of making one myself, but you beat me to the punch. |
| writer-jm 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseHoly cow!! Only two reviews?! This is a great story! You've taken characters and brought them to life in believable ways. I knew Luna was the sneaky type and knew she'd end up helping them. Abelia was the tough, but soft inside kind of girl. Even your original character was great. You played her as the quiet type. I honestly never thought of shoujoai in the Chronicles mode! That's pretty bad for me! (I'm a Sophitia/Taki fanatic) Thank you for opening my eyes!! Also, your progression was great. Extra points for additional coupling!! Are you going to do more?? Either way, this is going on my favorite list! I'll call it the 'surprise' of the week! |
| midnightdothack 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abuseWhat? Mooncalf is Luna's mom?! But I just got on Chronicle 11 in CotS! And Mooncalf is on the...blue/green side! (wishes she finished CotS sooner) ...bwah...anyway nice story. ^^ |
| Gundam Nightshade 2005-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseA very nice story. Well written and it's great to see a CoTS story finally. Keep up the great work friend. ~GN |