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Elena maiden of Gondor
2006-03-19
ch 6,
abuseAhh, she had triplets, three times the cuteness! I wonder what there names were? Good story, I especially liked the part when her husband was threating to tear the place apart when they wouldn't let him see her. Go husband, Go husband! Lol!
FunnyBunnyWarrior
2006-01-13
ch 3,
abuseYay! You updated! I must admit, towards the end I honestly thought that Amousca was going to die and that would've been a sad ending. I'm glad that she didn't though. I'm a sucker for happy endings.
Amousca
2006-01-10
ch 1,
abuseLol, didn't know I could review my own work... eheheh. Thanks for the supplementary review, thank you very much :) Well, Sarevok IS a changed man, and it's also that Amousca is so pathetically lawful good that she can't possibly hold a grudge against anyone - not even Sarevok. And anyway, he's her big brother after all.

As for anonymous reviews... how do I accept them?
FunnyBunnyWarrior
2006-01-07
ch 2,
abuseYou may get more reviews if you accept anonymous reviews. Three babies?! Oh poor, poor Amousca. Saervok being there for the birth? For some reason that seems strange to me but then again he is a changed man.
FunnyBunnyWarrior
2006-01-07
ch 1,
abuseVery nice! Poor Amousca, I can almost hear the comments that the nobles will make about she and Minsc later on. Minsc carrying her was a good touch. I was only slightly afraid when I saw that you had posted the stats because most of the time the characters are defined by there weapons or abilities when someone does that. However, once I began reading the story my fears were put to rest.
Kendris
2005-12-28
ch 1,
abuseOff to a good start!

LOVED Minsc sweeping her up, carrying her to the temple and kicking the doors open! Very much like the big guy!
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