Reviews for Unexpected Lives

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ranma hibiki 2008-09-08 ch 9,	abusepretty good all together, id give the story a 8 out of 10 stars ^_^
Grey Wolf4 2008-08-13 ch 9,	abuseSorry for the overdue review but nevertheless this is a worthwhile conclusion and in the end Shinji got what he really wanted a loving family! This was a great fic!
Gage V. Blackwood 2008-07-11 ch 6, anon.	abuseExcellent story...especially the part with the 17th angel... It took me a second to figure out what the "Ant Farm" was...but it was funny when i figured it out... keep up the good work...
blackdeathmessenger 2008-07-03 ch 9,	abusenothing like a happy ending once in a while.
94saturn 2008-06-03 ch 9,	abuseNice ending. A little rushed for your caliber of writing (I would have told you to play it out if I were proofreading) but you cleaned up the loose ends. The WAFF with the kids was great and it’s interesting in that I have been dealing with three little ones of late. It is amazing how they will walk all over you and wear you out! Well done my friend. Lord Saturn
94saturn 2008-06-02 ch 8,	abuseLOL, typical gunman. Great story….a little strange but a fun read. I’ll get to the next chapter as soon , as I can. Lord Saturn
Jamez 2008-06-02 ch 9, anon.	abuseI must admit, it had been a while since you've updated this story; in fact, I started reading this shortly after you put up the first chapter. I stopped after four or five a while back, when I got into other stories and other anime based fics. So, when I found some of your other stories and learned you wrote this one, I decided to wait, even if you had added a few more chapters. However, it seems you completed the final one in record time, and I had to re-read the whole story again to be reaquainted with it. But, I have to admit, you ended this story rather beautifully; even if some might say cliche with Yui coming back, but I liked it none-the-less. However, for some reason, as I came close to finishing the last chapter, I was metaphorically struke by a thought. While reading your epilogue, Yui's interaction with the surviving cast of NERV, a thought popped in my head. Not exactly a full blown story idea, but more of a 'what if' question. What if, during 01's first activation test, 4yr old Shinji somehow snuck through and climbed in, only to be absorbed by the EVA instead of either parent? (I added the 'either-parent' part due to a few other stories having Gendo willingly take Yui's place) But, what do you think?
Sun S. Li 2008-06-01 ch 9,	abuseAw cute ending. I'm glad that you ended this finally even though it was a bit abrupt but you are a man who tends to keep them short and simple. Hope to see what you pull off next.
Neferius 2008-06-01 ch 9,	abuseNothing against the children's names, which were fine, but did you have to use Sakura. I love the name but it is so overused in fan fiction that it can get a little vexing. It's not really a big deal, I just thought I'd mention it. Anyway, I really liked how this turned out. Gendo as a sex slave is pretty original considering he is usually just killed off or imprisoned instead. The future is bright for Shinji and Maya. Great work. Read ya Later.
Neferius 2008-06-01 ch 8,	abuseLong live the Rei clones. It would truly be a sight to see over a hundred identical teenage girls subdue trained military forces. You did a good job with the JSSDF attack and the end of the Eva battle was unique. I wonder what happened to Shinji. Read ya Later.
Rose1948 2008-05-31 ch 9,	abuse::sighs:: All good things come to an end. This was, and is, a very good story, hon. Sad to see its end, happy to see it's completion handled the way it was.
Rose1948 2008-05-31 ch 8,	abuseHon... I like. What more can I say?
Fury Cutter 2008-05-31 ch 9, anon.	abuseBout time you updated. This was a great story however I felt the ending was somewhat lacking, don't get me wrong I enjoyed this and its nice to see vision of NGE where everyone lives but it could have been pulled off better. All in all a good story, hope to see some updates for Concert & Shinji's Birthday Wish soon.
LbcLostKid 2008-05-31 ch 9,	abuseExcellent story.
straightedgebigevil 2008-05-31 ch 9,	abuseI wanna say one thing: Thank you gunman and I hope you can get on your other stories soon

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