aw how sweet i love how sanzo acts
to bad its a one shot though this could make a good chapter story ^_^ anyway thanks for writing

sweet...i don't like threesome but thx god u didn't write abt it...rather, u made it a sweet n touching fic...

they added a spell checker! sorry, totally off the subject. anyway, i wanted to tell you that as far as saiyuki stories go i have to say that yours are the best i've come across so far (i've been looking pretty hard too) you manage to keep them all in character dispite some of the situations they get stuck in, and that makes me happy. i hope you still write the sequel to 'perfect wold', because i liked that story quite a bit, but i understand the demands of having to write you own stories and get school/job/life into the mix as well (it's hard^_^) good luck to you, if you do get something published be shore to let people know, i'll hunt it down, your style is worth paying money for!

heh..how cute and bittersweet. I like how Sanzo included Rinrei in their relationship by saying four...And yeah overall it was very-well written and I loved reading it. =)

I loved this!

This story was beautiful. It carried that sort of air of a quiet beauty, and I felt it highlighted by the constant rain. I felt as though my heart would break for Homura, especially when he said "to her grave." The anniversary of someone's death is so incredibly difficult to deal with, and while I have never lost a lover like he had to death, I know what it is like for that time of year to come around. It hurts, and one could feel that in the story.

I also want to congradulate you again on your very telling lines of humor throughout the story. This was a serious story, but there were still parts that made me smirk. Sometimes it's a few little things that leave a bigger impact than a single large thing, and they were so perfectly woven in that it kept the delicate balance between humor and tragedy from going too far into either direction to be overwhelming.

There were two things I adored most about this fic (well, besides it being Homura/Sanzo mainly). The first is seeing Homura's humanity. So often he appears above that, and for fairly good reason. That's how he usually is, but he cannot deny his human side. Rinrei was the one who brought out that side in him, and still affected him later in the series with the decisions he made. And further here, one can see how Sanzo and Goku are helping to further bring out that humanity. That's the second thing I liked - so many threesome fics are only smut and made to simply be hot. Well, I've never been one to turn down one of those (especially with these three), but it isn't always going to be about sex. We got to see another important aspect of relationships here, and with a threesome it can get difficult. Homura and Sanzo naturally clash, and this story is great at showing some of that friction.

Lastly, and on a smutty note, I adored those little hints you put in the story about their "nighttime activities." It wasn't even citrus most of the time, but in some ways even hotter than lime. It leaves much to the reader's imagination.

All in all, well done.

-Iapetus