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| Jaiden Moon 2008-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseAbout time James faced the truth. He couldn't have remained ignorant his entire life, and he needed to see that his perfect little world was a complete lie. It will be interesting to see how he reforges his relationships, and the part he will play in future events. An enemy or an ally? Weak or strong? We will see... |
| L'uke-chan 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abusethis maze you created ^_^ is really awesome, I wouldn't even have thought of it.. Wow.. Nice chapter! |
| EvilDime 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseOuch. That was painful. But good, very good. Now I wonder how much strength of character James really has won. That is not something that changes from one day to the other, even though a powerful magical artefact was involved. Will he relapse into running away from things that frighten or over-challenge him? How long until his newly found understanding of Harry begins to waver once more? I wish him good luck and steadfastness. ; ) |
| Potterworm 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseTotally awesome! |
| Emiwee 2007-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was well done. It's really good to know what James went through in the maze - it fills in some gaps. Scenes that we knew must have happened but that we'd not seen before. |
| mortenavida 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI almost forgot about this! But I saw it, so I read it before moving on to the fourth installment. Poor James, but I love the way you portray him as Not the Perfect Parent. It's -real- and that's awesome. Good job! |
| ghostninja85 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseMy god I've been reading your story line so deeply that I just couldn't stop to review. This AU is excellent. I find myself thinking about the current plot, the possible future plot, the events of the past that made the characters in your story act the way they did... all as much as the real series. You have my highest compliments. Now on to the next story. |
| Jester08 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abuseGreat one-shot. I'm glad we got to see what happened with James in the maze!! Keep up the good work! ^_^ |
| Stoneage Woman 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseExcellent ficlet. James grew up- and it was a long time coming. I can't wait to see more interactions between him and Harry. Now I'm off to read "Persuasion" by Jane Austen, which I've neglected because of this series, but rest assured (in spite of the fact that the next few stories are going to be longer than any other fanfic I've read) I WILL READ THEM! Oh, and another thing, your flamer is nuts. Delete the review. You have every right to write a dark story- and you did warn everyone that it WAS dark- so he or she has no right to complain! |
| reader A 2006-12-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI hate You for What You have Forced on me! I won't read such kind of dark fic if I have seen any caution on the page!! Do you think text can't hurt!? You should have warn us of the DARKNESS lay behind your story!! I haven't written anything so un constructive to a writter b4 this! But your story compelled me to do so. Reading your story makes me feel being lured to drink some kind of poison. As reader we could see nothing out or ordinary in the page you describe your story's nature. Summary: AU, eventual HP/DM slash, (very) Slytherin!Harry. Harry’s brother Connor is the Boy-Who-Lived, and Harry has devoted himself to protecting him—by being ordinary. But certain people aren’t content to let Harry hide in the shadows. Would you please be more responsible for being a writer??!! angry reader A |
| Kali09 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseI was wondering what James exactly faced when he went into the MAze... good job. |
| banner 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseWonderful descriptions and characterizations, as always... |
| Ansku 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseThank you for adding this one, it's good to know that at least his intentions are pure this time around :) |
| thrnbrooke 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseWow! I'd love to walk that maze! Though I'm not a Potter so that's probably not a wise decision! On to the next story! |
| Yurikitsune 2006-05-27 ch 1, | abusethis has been very interesting to read, especially when considering that the readers have not had a great opportunity to understand James.. he seemed rather rarely mentioned.. hmm.. we'll see if he plays a bigger role now =) i had forgotten to mention at the end of the third story that it is interesting to see the transition to the next story with a clear objective on some parts: to find and free regulus.. very interesting =) |