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| xiia 2007-09-15 ch 17,  | abuseVery good. |
| Prince Kame 2006-10-29 ch 17, | abuseAwesome ending! I loved how you ended it. How sad that the girl died though, but still.. awesome ending. Great story really! The whole plot came together in the end, but it left room for that promised sequel (which, if you know a little about me by now, I'll be poking you to hurry up with xD) in which I cannot tell what's going to happen. Something good most likely. I really liked how romance was a side plot in this story. It wasn't the center of the story, but the plot was. It's nice to read a story like that. Anyways, I shall be waiting for your sequel. Eagerly, most likely. |
| littlemisssweetheart 2006-10-29 ch 17, | abusegreat ending i really loved this whole story i like the way you had hierra save rose i thought it was sweet can't wait to read the sequel i hope there will be more mystery and rose/ed fluff ^_^ |
| edmari 2006-10-29 ch 17, anon. | abuseomg!thats the coolest story evah!not only you should make a sequel but you have to make edward and rose kiss already!that would be so cute^^i felt bad for little hierra.poor thing.well i hope the sequel will be really good!^^ ~adios~ |
| Gin-Tono 2006-10-06 ch 16, | abuseOh good gosh! I want a sequel.-Just read the story as Kame finally made her- |
| Prince Kame 2006-10-02 ch 16, | abuseIt depends on you, really. If you think that you are up for making a sequel, then by all means, DO IT! And if you think you might not have that much time, or you want to get it over with, then finish it. Whatever works best for you. but if it's a matter of what the reviewers want, then I say Sequel. :B Just means more reading for me. And you ain't rotten. Sometime's people have a thing called a "life outside of fanfiction." (I know it's hard to believe everyone. I found it hard to believe myself.) So I'll keep-a waiting. But if it takes to long (you know.. fanfiction withdrawls) then expect a message. -evil laughter- Mm, pie. |
| littlemisssweetheart 2006-08-27 ch 15, | abusegasp a blood sacrifice that doesn't sound good, are they gonna drain her blood or somthing O.o poor hierra i fell bad for her too everybody is getting screwed in this story but at least they found rose update soon ok :) |
| Prince Kame 2006-08-26 ch 15, | abuseSecond last chapter? So the next chapter is the last? D: what a drag. Very good chapter, yes very good. I am glad you updated. ^^ It was an intriguing chapter although I kept on getting interrupted. I liked you're description of her escape. |
| Sotroublesome. 2006-07-29 ch 14, | abusecool story continue plz ~sabaku no meian |
| Prince Kame 2006-07-27 ch 14, | abuseYay! Well, at least it was only a five week wait. xD -had counted- I should have known it would be updated the day I didn't check to see if it was updated. Yeah... Thats how much I like this story. >0> Anyways, great chapter. Short, but really who cares? I hope you update soon. And I'll take that pie. |
| Fire Kunai 2006-07-15 ch 13, | abusehm things keep getting interesting. Please update soon and can I have a cookie? |
| Fire Kunai 2006-07-15 ch 6, | abuseOH cookies can I have one:) Another great chapter. I cant wait to read more |
| Fire Kunai 2006-07-15 ch 5, | abuseHm I wonder who this Hierra is? I have heard a name like that before but she was a baby called Hera. Anyway another good chapter |
| Fire Kunai 2006-07-15 ch 4, | abuseGosh who is this unknown girl? Another good chapter:) Now onwards with the story! |
| Fire Kunai 2006-07-15 ch 2, | abusePoor old Bloch! anyway another good chapter and I agree, EdXRose rocks! |