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| ImagingThings 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseSweet! |
| neko-jin72 2008-02-09 ch 3, | abuseman, that was a great story! i loved the way the sisters felt when they found the presents from chris and noone got him anything. so sad!! i hate leo, he's a jerk. good job getting his character with Chris right. well written! congrats |
| goldacharmed 2007-12-30 ch 3, | abuseoh my g-d. that was so fu#*%# good. i loved it. i kept wishing it was longer. the only bad thing i have to say about it was that it was to short. dude you rock. i had my sweet 16 last year. it rocked. i hope yours did too. ps great story. |
| goldacharmed 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abusei hate you. you actuly made me cry. thats how good you are at writing emotion. thats was so sad. im goning to read the next two chapters now. you are a very talinted writer. and your so good at the sad parts. that was the first time EVER that i litteraly cried while reading a fan fic. your really amazing. now look im such a baby, im still crying. now look what your amazing talient has done. no really god job. il reveiw on chapter 3 see ya |
| zeo knight 2007-12-16 ch 3, | abusegood work and most like ly late happy birthday |
| anonymous-unknown 2007-12-09 ch 3, | abuseWow, 16, or should I say 17 now, and you can write like this? You have talent, that's for sure. A few spelling and grammatical errors but still extremely well writen. This has got to be the best Charmed Christmas story I have ever read! |
| TaintedDarkInuShemeeko 2007-12-02 ch 3, | abuseThis was a very well written Christmas tale. I Enjoyed reading it. As for the electric fence and crawling under it I'm very familiar with it. Nothing like a good jump start for your heart. ;-) |
| ksloan9142 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abusei like it |
| 10000 Dead Roses 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseawesome |
| PrInCeSsFBi 2007-08-19 ch 3, | abuseWell then Merry Christmas Happy Hankuka (i spelled that wrong) HAPPY EASTER i loved it it was Great going into my faves |
| PrInCeSsFBi 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseAww i love it ok ON TO THE NEXT CHAPPIE |
| MorganD 2007-08-11 ch 3, | abuseThis was really sweet, and precisely the theme I was looking for. I love alternative scenarios for how Piper -- and particularly Leo -- found out about Chris' true identity. Canon was a bit too economic on the angst and drama for my personal taste. ^__^ Great job! |
| YouLuvMeCosImCrazy 2007-06-13 ch 3, | abusewow! this story is amazing, i love it! good job! |
| QuestionMarks11 2007-06-04 ch 3, | abuseThat is truly a fabulous story , maybe piper shouldn't have found out that early about chris being her son but still leo and chris were portrayed fantastically, keep on writing more stories like this because i garuntee i will be reading them , great story again , ? |
| Sakurabound 2007-03-22 ch 3, | abuseWow. That was really good! You are an amazing writer! I know its late, but Happy Birthday! This story is definitely going on my FAV! Abbz |