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| The Enchanted Teakettle 2007-08-15 ch 1,  | abuseWonderful fic! It was very entertaining, and I enjoyed the dialogue and the interactions between Jack and Will, as it went well with their relationship in the canon. The characterizations and the writing style were well done too! ~ TET |
| Diana 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. & quite amusing in places as well. Your use of descriptive vocabulary is certainly impressive & I found myself able to visualize the scene clearly through your excellent wordsmith skills. I quite enjoyed it & I thank you for the lovely read. -- Diana |
| Jennifer Lynn Weston 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseI'd call that a durned good summary of Jack and Will's relationship by the end of the first movie. |
| Peace Like a River 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseYay, I love this! I think Jack and Will were very in character, and the banter you have between them is just perfect! I especially liked these lines... Jack about-faced and held up a rigid forefinger between his frown and that on Will's face. "Boy, have I ever led you astray?" Will narrowed his eyes. "Frequently." Jack paused, studied his extended finger, and then lengthened his gaze to Will's face. "Let me rephrase. Have I ever led you into circumstances from which you were not fully capable of extricating yourself?" And I also love how they end up having that great swordfight, working together like they did at the end of the first movie! One comment I do have, though, is that Jack's letter to Will seemed just a tad wordy. But only a tad. Good job, this is going in my favorites! |
| BelleMarie 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseWell done! Your use of language is exquisite, and your characterizations are dead-on! |
| Rogue-Pirate 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuse"Such a lovely place you've chosen, Jack," Will murmured. "This is undoubtedly where Hell takes its holidays." LOL...no doubt mate, I've no doubt at all that this is true... Jack about-faced and held up a rigid forefinger between his frown and that on Will's face. "Boy, have I ever led you astray?" Will narrowed his eyes. "Frequently." Again, LOL. Well written, I can just see Jacks face...brillaint! This is good. Ta. Rogue-pirate |