Hi,

Great story until the sixth chapter. After that, I really prefer the direction the fanfic was taking in the first version. We can't love everything, no? But I'm not saying that I din't love the end, it's only that it's a little bit too sentimental for me. Your first try didn't seem to go in this way. Maybe I'm wrong too...

Continue to write fantastic stories. You have a lot of talent and great ideas. I'll be waiting your next creation!

thats from the rascal flatts song

Wow! This was an hot chapter!

You caught me. While I was reading your exciting and delicious descriptions, I never thought that it could be a dream, but I asked myself where you was going with all that. It wasn't fitting at all with your first version of this story, but maybe you had fallen on your head!

In spite of all that, your descriptions seem to be so real, as if we were in this kitchen and we could feel everything. One more time, I want to congradulate you to dare to write erotic scenes. They are crude and it's great! Maybe some peoples can be offend, but I'm not, and more then that, I'm happy and I appreciate it a lot.

So, continue this fabulous story. As always, I'm really eager to know what gonna happen with the bet. Does Parker will win or will it be Lyle? Post the next chapter soon please and give us some clues.

damn, just a dream... that was mean of you!

please update sooner!

It was only a dream? Making love , hot, passionate love in a dream? It wasn't for real? Well, charro, you could have let him finish up his fantasy before he woke up. I loved the leaky faucet part...loved the part she's about to receive the hot fourth of July celebration, talk about DEEP THROAT...I loved...**, I loved every descriptive scenario of their foreplay. This was a nasty x-rated chapter and if I was your writing instructor, I'd give you an A+!

Great chapter! Update soon :)

Wow! This is a chapter rich in emotions. I would have love it even more if it had been a little bit longer, but it doesn't matter.

In this chapter, Jarod's anger is palpable. It's great that you success to make the characters express their feelings so well. It really hepls us to understand the context when we can feel the emotions that are in it.

I'm eager to see how you'll manage chapter 5, so post it as soon as you can, please. I know I said it a couple of times, but I really prefer this version of your story. Continue your great job.

LOVE IT MORE SOON...PLEASE

Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh! I've never heard Jarod swear so much as I did right now reading this. I mean, I could actually hear his voice. It was so unlke him, but yet, after all these years, he finally exploded! “Had another ** weak moment!”. I loved that part. Oh hell, I loved every word from the beginning to the end. Bravo!

You HAVE to continue! I love this story, and I can't wait to see what will happen next.

Hey TBC is the question but the answer is YES

I cannot believe u ended it there...i really hope u update soon...this story is unique and incredible

Wow! I can tell you that, for sure, you won't loose me as a reader.

I love the new direction you gave to your story and I also love that this fanfic is rated "M". There isn't a lot of writers who dare to do it and, some sex references don't offend me at all.

So don't be affraid to continue in this writing style and don't let yourself influence by the ones who tell you to change your fanfic. Stick to the version you have in mind. I find it's a really fantastic story and I'm already waiting the next chapter! If you aren't sure if you continue it or not, please, at least, do it for me because, since the beginning of this story, I want to know how it gonna end, and I'm telling you again: I WANT TO KNOW HOW IT GONNA END! So, I count on you to post chapter 4 as soon as you can.

P.S. Sorry for the mistakes...

Well, this was a twist...

I can't say I like this Parker, I hope you have her change soon.

Hey charro! This is one person you're not going to lose as a reader. This chapter was fantastic! I only wish I thought of this. Lyle is a sicko! Sick! Sick! Sick! And I love the way you're writing him. Keep up the great work. Update soon. Anna