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| K.W. 2007-07-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseAbsolutely fantastic! You really captured them perfectly. This is the first House fic I read and lucky me, it's a great one. Bravo! :D |
| CrazyGabs 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseRead this while listening to The Fray and I dare you not to cry lol. Really lovely, bitter sweet story. x |
| HannahCimsGwendolyn 2006-09-22 ch 1, | abuseYou did an excellent job in writing this . . .very sad! I felt bad for poor House, but he did deserve it! -Hannah |
| Alice in June 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseA sad but plausible look into the future. A lovely, simple short story and it's so sad that they keep getting him calenders. Love the structure and the parantheses. The last line breaks my heart. |
| Nyah 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done. I like that you just hin tat what happened between them. And bravo on that last line. |
| Alaska Steele 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseSo well written, so perfect...I especially like the notes in parentheses. It totally captured the message behind this one. Especially the last sentence within parentheses...I got goosebumps. Nice work. Love it. Hats off to you. -alaska |
| Laivin 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuseoh mah gawd, i love it ^_^ so very very good :) *elf hugs and kisses* Laivine |
| nanashi-reikon 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abusehm, 14 year old writer, cool, same here. i like teh meaphor/analogy w/ teh calendar. so true that life has to be messy. you have a gift. your words arent plated, glossy and shiny with nothing to back it. its the real thing telling a story, making the reader feel. anyway, i'm rambling. btw, got a screen name? |
| QT Roo 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseI love this! Well done! |
| PrInCeSsPaRkLe 2005-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abusewow that was incredible!! I wish I could write angst...well anywho wonderful fic!! |
| EvilspyAchacia 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abusewell done merry X Mas Kira P.s. Im sick and that sucks, but your story is really good. Yeah i know to much info but im feeling sorry for myself. |
| loves him 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abuseBloody brilliant! |