 Midnight46 2009-09-12 . chapter 1Hey man, i know it has been a while. Just wanted to let you know that this was a great story, even if it was only a small one. I always loved your portrayal of vegeta. Very true to the anime. |
 TrinityTepes 2009-05-24 . chapter 1i love this! |
 Phoenixarrow 2009-02-04 . chapter 1Nice story. It was a fun read and made me laugh multiple times. I admit it struck me funny when you described as a gift giving holiday only, but I think it was a good call. I commend you everyone stayed in character. Not an easy thing.
I hope you keep writing.
God bless |
 Kane Shi Megami 2008-04-25 . chapter 1Your Vegeta was very much incharacter. Very humorous and good read. :)
KSM |
 Hebi R. 2008-02-10 . chapter 1Your Christmas sounds about right for Japan. I was reading an article recently about how the Japanese have adopted the commercial, "peace on earth," and Santa aspects of Christmas, but not the religious aspects. |
 Gothicthundra 2007-07-22 . chapter 1That was so sweet! |
 Musette Fujiwara 2007-05-26 . chapter 1wow... awesome...
it was funny... although Vegeta didn't really got the point... too bad he was a little dense, maybe the next Christmas it will be different... after all they do stay together... |
 pitkat 2006-08-15 . chapter 1I read this story a long time ago and came across it again. Beautifully written. I could almost see an expansion on it. Happy writing! :) |
 Katiefoolery 2006-05-22 . chapter 1This was so much fun! It was quite well-written and enjoyable to read. Christmas shopping would be so much easier if we all had a Saiyan warrior or two to help us... |
 hlewin 2006-02-20 . chapter 1I just had to read this myself since I've heard so much about it. I loved it! You are an excellent writer and I am very proud of you. |
 deletedaccount1 2006-01-07 . chapter 1Aw... I thought your story was cute! I love the way Bulma and Vegeta slowly warm up to each other. I was so angry when Yamcha arrived, though. I was hoping to see what Bulma said next. The whole shopping incident was very funny. I was particularly amused when Vegeta scared away that teenage thief. All in all, I enjoyed this story very much. The Christmas thing wasn't a problem either; I wasn't offended, at least. |
 Rejhan 2005-12-27 . chapter 1Hehe, I quite enjoyed this. Picturing that puzzled look on Vegeta's face when he saw the Christmas tree made me smile ... and Bulma making him go shopping with her was a classic! I loved it! Very well done for your first one-shot fic! |
 hidden manna 2005-12-27 . chapter 1I love this story, especially the shopping part. That part was really funny and no you didn't offend me. I'm a Christian also. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. |
 kitty 2005-12-26 . chapter 1 Hi!
In my opinion the story is welldone!
Above all in cause of it's pointlessness and I really liked the way you show the characters, because some peoples ...make them to act against their normal manner.
Do you know, what I mean?!
Do you continue with writing? |
 Nova Flame 2005-12-26 . chapter 1It's kind of strange to watch Bulma and Vegeta act this way towards each other, especially after the way you portray them in your other stories. Overall, it's a fun story and I enjoyed it. |