|Reviews for The Greatest Gift|
| Usami 6/20/06 . chapter 1
That was so cute! I really liked it a lot. I always thought about what would happen if Ryou and Malik got around to talking after the Battle City tournament, and I imagined that Ryou wouldn't hold a grudge. He's so cute.
Anyway, it was really cute. I enjoyed it very much. Ryou/Malik happens to be one of my favorite pairings! Anyway, nice job!
| YOURMOMONTOAST 5/22/06 . chapter 1
| Kurai-hime 4/25/06 . chapter 1
I think, that if you do continue it, you should say what happens during the holidays and what they get eachother for presents o
| Sporky- queen of the sand 4/20/06 . chapter 1
it wasn't bad! it was awsome! I really liked it!
| Saori Aki Orimi 4/2/06 . chapter 1
Nya! *huggles* so... so... KA-WAII!
and it wasn't bad, it was better than mine... (i try too hard) It was beautiful and a joy to read (makes you want more but I'm not one to press a one-shot) I lovle it!
| PSYchOtiC-teNdencieS 3/16/06 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so cute!
Ek, what a gushy way to put it. XD
I love that ending. It made me feel all warm inside. Such magnificent fluff.
All it really needs now is a little editing. There were a few grammatical errors, and moments that could be smoothed over, but hey. I think you can do it.
| ladygodess 3/16/06 . chapter 1
I loved the cloud parting part on Ryou, all you need was to add in a little music *giggles* that's what i had in my head anyway, loved .
| Hiroshi's girl 3/5/06 . chapter 1
i don't know what your talking about, that was great! Totally cute. i love this pairing and this story! -hug- you should write another one for me. i'll love you forever, i swear! oh! and i'll give you a cookie too! please!
| fAtAlflAme 2/10/06 . chapter 1
Oh wow it's so...happy. It makes me happy _ I love the use of the corny lines like "it was a cloudy day" and stuff, and the way they fully fit into this story! See, if i tried that...well...lets not get into that. We don't want to scare all of those possible reviewers lurking out there! Now, if i could just figure out who half those people are... o.O *backs away* I don't belong! ah well, GOOD STORY! *runs away from rabid yu-gi-oh fans*
| Safiya 1/26/06 . chapter 1
Aw! That was so cute! :3 -hearts MalikxRyou pairing- Haha. That was very good and I thoroughly enjoyed it. It's so hard to find good MalikxRyou stories these days. -sigh- At least I have found one! Muha!
| Her Sweetness 1/16/06 . chapter 1
Aw, that wasn't terrible! It was great! I love Angstshipping. And I think you did it justice, great job.
Goodbye and Goodluck.
| Heather 1/8/06 . chapter 1
. . . Interesting. Geez! Ryou's kind of confident in this story! The "I'll see you later then" line made me laugh. Wow. Very intense. Okay, I'm just drarwing this out so I have something to say, but there's nothing left to say, so I'm going now. Great job!
| Saruwatari 12/30/05 . chapter 1
Hello my dear! Lovely story, tuly it is. I just wanted to repay your kindness for always reviewing my stories. You say you didn't know how to do romance, but you could've fooled me!
Ah, angstshipping... what a joyous pairing.
| Punk-Out 12/29/05 . chapter 1
Aww! That waz adorable!
| Nekokitsune 12/28/05 . chapter 1
RU-CHAN! _ I’m so unbelievably proud of you! You said you’d write one up and you did! Congrats! (And you actually did it really, really fast O.o – That’s probably what scared me the most.) *gloom* … You know… I really would have been first to review if I hadn’t been in Niagara. *sighs* You know how crazy I am with reviews, and so, you get one! *heart heart heart* Hee hee, anyways, back to the point of the review! It was absolutely the most kawaii thing I’ve ever read for a very, very long time . I must admit, Malik-kun was slightly, slightly OOC… but I can’t blame you (OUR RPS HAS TAKEN OVER OUR LIVES!*gasps and dies*) But because he was OOC, it added to the mood of the fanfic. It was sweet and not rushed. I’m glad that you didn’t rush it; after all, Malik-kun just suddenly realized that he loved Ryou-san. (… Well… not suddenly realized… but because he finally admitted it that counts for something small) Another really great thing, is that it was fluffy, but not so fluffy that there was a dramatic kiss near the end. It was small, but that was the best part. After all, this was mostly in Malik-kun’s mind, and with Malik-kun’s thoughts. _ So I’m glad that you didn’t constantly switch around the POV’s! Kudos for youu! (*checks over review* Eep! Not long enough!) But enough about the ending, I wanna go on and on about the introduction! XD Well, I certainly did enjoy it – What’s more cheerless than our little Malik-kun all alone for both the holidays and his birthday? – It definitely set the most perfect mood when he met everyone at school! _ Absolutely perfectly set up! *squeals* Well! I really should end here… before you like… attack me with… rabid bunnies…. -_-; (Don’t ask, my reviewers threaten me with those…) O.o Or spam me! Don’t spam ne! XD Well, great job! I really recommend you writing another one! (Will you write a JouxSeto one for me? _ WHACK *gets hit by Seto’s duel disk* Wh-What was that for! I only asked!) _ Well! Good luck! (Oh, and if you want, this would really make a fantastic … series… or two-shot… or sequel… Meh. The point is, that I hope you’ll make more shounen-ai fanfics!) Ja ne! Neko