This is a good story but it sort of confuses me. After a while of reading, I lost interest in going on to read it. You might want to be more clear at the begining on what their discriptions are. It just sort of didn't fit altgether and flow nicely.

This was a very good chapter! I got really excited to find out that Balmung and Alyssa has a kissing scene. About time! *shakes fist* >

“I promise not to hurt you.”

And -just- when I thought the really big bunch of romance was gonna come along with a smile and a kiss from Alyssa...

“Thanks. But I know its no guarantee.”

Wow. That was just... her. It really went along with how she was through out the entire -former- one-shot! And, when you think about it, she was being herself. Really creep how you were able to work that creepy fact and attribute (wrong word I think) into it. I love it. Nobody is Somebody is right - you should continue and W.r.i.t.e. .m.o.r.e.! Please?

This was awesome and Balmung sounded so cool in this. I love his sense of humor and his way of thinking ... XD the 'peeping tom' part, or however you put it, was awesome. Whether it's just me or not, I can imagine (a high school) Balmung being a bit of an peeping tom. I dunno, it just works with him in my opinion.

Oh, and when is Alyssa going to be in Man Eating Orchids? And when is In All My Bitterness and Man Eating Orchids going to be updated? And what about Heist? -blinks- Hmm...? I noticed that you said that you had a chapter or something typed up at the end of the epilogue for Sakura Blossoms (which was awesome by the way!! Loved it, can't wait for the sequel!), and I think it also mentioned that you had specific dates set up for them as well. ... And like.. I kinda wanna know...

Put them on your bio, if need be.

Well... I've said a lot! ANd I have ONE more thing.

Alyssa's clothes kick ass. I love them. I want them!

Ok. I'm down and ou-oot!! --:Ice's Luvah:--

OMG good writing! That was so cool! You should totally write more!