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Reviews For: The Dying Wish

Louiseifer
2006-04-24
ch 1,
abuseWoah. This is powerful stuff. I don't really see Revan as female, but quality of writing always makes up for little niggles like that. I'd like to se eyour interpretation of how a Darkside Revan gets her claws into Carth, though, as in game he tends to die, and if he didn't he doesn't seem the submissive type.
Still. Beautiful writing!
DarthNexus9000
2006-04-14
ch 1,
abuseinteresting
Selena Mars
2006-03-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseoh my, it was so touching.
Definetely a good idea to carry this one on, I bet it would be great. You are one of my favorite authors. Your romance is so good.
Dranzen
2006-03-25
ch 1,
abuseThat was...disturbing. Well written, but disturbing. You spelt angel wrong, that was about it.

~Zen-chan
Queenofinsanity
2006-01-07
ch 1,
abuseit could use a sequel, really
Amme Moto
2005-12-28
ch 1,
abuseSequels are all good and greart, but I think that this one would be better off without one. You get what I mean? Just leave the mystery of that happens. ^_^ It was sad; I cried in my mind. Lol. Props!
Atashi
2005-12-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseOMFG You have outdone yourself! This is so awesome! T_T You keep making me cry...*sniff*
Dante-Raven
2005-12-26
ch 1,
abuseThis was really good--and it speaks of many many more things to come. It has the potential to become more and I would like to see what path Carth tries to set his children upon. Good job--damn good job. that must be some good chocolate.
lOngshotOR
2005-12-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, that was... dark?

Very creepy and macabre Cortessa, and I wonder why you're the only one that writes DS/Revan that way. Kinda freaky, but good.
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