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| Louiseifer 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abuseWoah. This is powerful stuff. I don't really see Revan as female, but quality of writing always makes up for little niggles like that. I'd like to se eyour interpretation of how a Darkside Revan gets her claws into Carth, though, as in game he tends to die, and if he didn't he doesn't seem the submissive type. Still. Beautiful writing! |
| DarthNexus9000 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseinteresting |
| Selena Mars 2006-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh my, it was so touching. Definetely a good idea to carry this one on, I bet it would be great. You are one of my favorite authors. Your romance is so good. |
| Dranzen 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was...disturbing. Well written, but disturbing. You spelt angel wrong, that was about it. ~Zen-chan |
| Queenofinsanity 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuseit could use a sequel, really |
| Amme Moto 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseSequels are all good and greart, but I think that this one would be better off without one. You get what I mean? Just leave the mystery of that happens. ^_^ It was sad; I cried in my mind. Lol. Props! |
| Atashi 2005-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMFG You have outdone yourself! This is so awesome! T_T You keep making me cry...*sniff* |
| Dante-Raven 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good--and it speaks of many many more things to come. It has the potential to become more and I would like to see what path Carth tries to set his children upon. Good job--damn good job. that must be some good chocolate. |
| lOngshotOR 2005-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was... dark? Very creepy and macabre Cortessa, and I wonder why you're the only one that writes DS/Revan that way. Kinda freaky, but good. |