No offense but a lot of this is completely Out of Character. There is no way they would say this, but you have good ideas behind this

I love Cathy's poem. It really makes you wonder about what was really running through her head as she was given that choice. You should have Heathcliff's part be much more harsh, though.

I really like this.I know what you mean when you feel like you aren't the best poet/writer in the world. I feel like I'm not the best writer in the world, but I love to write even when I get a nasty review, for there are ton's of people out there that like your story or not. Are the Hardy books good? I am a Nancy Drew fan and have read all the books that I could find or get my hands on. You should try Nancy Drew...they are really good, but I don't know if I should write a story for that section or not...but keep up with writing for Wuthering Heights, you are a great writer in my opinion.