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| killuakills 2008-08-15 ch 2,  | abusedude... you... totally... rock... this story is so completely creative and just amazing that... ITS JUST AWESOME! all the characters are completely in character, all the events are like they're actually happening in the game... ITS LIKE PLAYING THE SEQUEL WITHOUT A CONTROLLER! *sniffs* YOU ROCK! |
| IvanDePon 2007-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abusewaahahah sweet one! |
| Cisqua 2007-03-01 ch 2, | abuseWow! That was an awesome chapters! All that talk, fighting and stuff, that was so cooler than expected from the first chapters... I'm so gonna love this story! Can you please update soon... I'm really going crazy if you don't please please please! for the sake of not-hanging-in-the-air! prety please! I really love this... Cisqua |
| RR Lyrae 2007-02-02 ch 2, | abuseOMGZ, Jack't in trouble now. Keep writing, I wanna see how it all turns out. ;D |
| TotoroChibi 2007-01-28 ch 2, | abuseSeeing as it took you about a year to update, I suppose I can safely assume that it will take you a while to update again. Nevertheless, I eagerly await the next chapter, as this story is very well written. Two-thumbs up! |
| Karang 2006-12-23 ch 1, | abuseVery Very Very nice. I wish for more to come! |
| Cloner4000 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseAh, you really tie up the end of the story... The ending just isn't clear enough. And Jarvis and Daniel are back, I was so sad when Jarvis and Daniel try to drag Jack back, to face an old friend like that. Plz continue |
| KTAH 2006-11-05 ch 2, | abuseWell done! This is probably the best story I've read on FanFiction yet! I hope you continue on with this story! |
| Nirvana Fox 2006-11-03 ch 2, | abuseI like your take on the first ending to Radiata Stories. I'm intrigued at how the humans and non-humans can actually agree something like that. Of course, with a long history of tension, I imagine that it won't be easy; it may be a bit impossible. And Ridley. She seems to be dying. Update soon. |
| Story Weaver1 2006-10-14 ch 2, | abuseAnd I didn;t think this story could get any better. It's gotten funnier, cuter, and more interesting. Natalie's perverted accustations were amoung of the most funny. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Story Weaver1 2006-10-14 ch 1, | abuseA very IC fic. Jack and Ridley's bickering was so cute it made go all Squeeish. Then the next part had some good emotional intensity. |
| Music's Fallen Angel 2006-10-06 ch 2, | abuseo love it!! moremoremoremoremoremore...please? ^-^ can't wait for and update! F.G. |
| Souless Gaurdian End Fighte... 2006-10-05 ch 2, | abuseWow Your Really good,Better than me by 10 times,I Wish I Could write like that but I suck,Anways good job |
| kevin3485 2006-01-20 ch 1, | abuseNice little twist there at the end. Liked it a lot. And did you think the ending was a little cheap? I mean, you spent who knows how long climbing that blasted sand maze labrinth...thing...and all you get is Jack and Ridley walking back into Radiata...Jack was right. "Why is it that you can say what you want and walk away...when I have things I want to say to you." (sigh)... |
| blottyparchment 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI find this so meaningful. You had a great interpretation of the non-human ending it be the real thing. Wish Tri-Ace made some confirmation as to that ending but you're fic is something that completes it. Beautiful writing you have here. |