tikku disturbs me because tidus just SO cannonly belongs with yuna =P lol. but looking at this from fifteen year old rikku pov you wrote amazingly well. i reallyy loved the "machina metropolis". the alliteration sounds so beautiful when you say it/read it; "majestic magic and beauty" as well.

loved her reactions to every little thing he did or said. very realistic and relatable to real-life crushes and whatnots; the "My heart flutters when he says my name" and the "I fear that he might hear my heart beating so rapidly" especially.

simple, sweet, sad. loved it very much, and c'mon! you still gots 94 oneshots to go =)

i think you shouldnt have ended it so abruptly. it seemed a bit off balance with all the pain and anguish in the story and then a very sharp ending that seems to cut away just as sharply with the horror youve built up (and i usuaslly prefer to be soothed down by a comforting last sentence instead lol)

i understand though that its a relativly short piece and doesnt really require a long ending so same same it works either way =)

it was nice that you revealed the setting at the end and how it tied into her memory. the beginning i just didnt like the word "popped" because it sounds really light and friendly and an attack isnt light and friendly.

fave part was "like hell i will" =)) cid's cool haha. seems very in his character.

the way it was set and built up, i like this better than the other one i read (but the other was good too!).

aw it makes my day to know i made your day =) LOL. ill come back later (hopefully to some gippal winkwinknudgenudge).

its very simple. nothing really new or special or even a message that seems to be hidden in this oneshot. you tell it like a factual, unbiased (sorta) account of their moemnt together. and i like it because you dont try to manipulate the reader. it reads very surreally and light and makes you kinda jealous that you dont have such simplicity (and gippal!) in your life =) i think you did a good job. im amazed that youre taking up this challenge, and will be back to read more when my eyes arent bloodshot red. keep writing.

This was neat. I love Rikku. She's awesome. I liked Shatter the most for some reason. Probably because the implied Tikku. Please include another Tikku, maybe one that's a little more than implied. ^_~ Don't be afraid to try out new pairings because of the closed mindness of some people.

I don't care if people don't like Tikku's (I do. :)) they shouldn't trash ya for writing one. Good job. :)

aww...so sad!

i liked it, but it was sad.

so sad!! i wanted to cry!

Hehe. Singing in the rain! ^_^

aww...such cute fluff! but i did notice where you referred to gippal as having eyes. this is not technically correct. he has one eye; the other is covered by a patch. not a big issue, but one i thought you might want to adress.

How, did I let this little colaboration of Rikku stories get past me? She's my favorite character for crying out loud. I like the fact that there will be 100 stories for Rikku in the future. Pardon me whilst I go yell at myself for missing this 'story'.

aw... that was just so sad.. i really enjoyed your story.. but could you put the translations from al bhed? please... thaks :D and GREAT GREAT story :D

*sniff* i wanted to cry too! sad! short, but well written and well rounded. descriptive too, for a short as it was. nice work!

Very nice.

Excellent.

One hundred one-shots? O.O Wow. Good luck there! Nice start, though...Nice little peice! Now, only ninety-nine to go...~.^